2017专四作文：手把手教你每段该怎么写

　　2016年起英语专业四级考试(TEM-4)进行重大改革，作文部分从以前的命题作文变成了命题材料作文，而取消了note-writing。时间为45分钟，分数是20分。

　　作文的形式大致为，给出一张表格陈述了一个论点的正反方意见，要求：The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.

　　很多专四考生还是对题型一头雾水，下面新东方在线专四频道就来手把手教大家每段该怎么写。

　　2017专四作文到底该怎么写?整个结构如何?

　　在解答这个问题前，我们首先要了解作文到底要写什么?很多学生养成了衣来伸手饭来张口的习惯，最期待任何一位老师能给自己一个模板，没有自己的想法。作文写什么并不是由哪个老师或者参考书说了算，作文写什么需要看的是题目!

　　那么我们再细读一下题目要求：write your response in about 200 words in which you shouldfirst summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue. 很明显：给定材料的summary(以下简称summary)和你自己的view(以下简称comments)是考试的两个最核心的部分!

　　任何一个合适的结构模式都应该包含这两个部分，而且应该凸显这两个部分!所以，只要符合把summary和comments作为核心的写作模式都是可以的，分成几段话写只是我们在探讨用什么最优化的模式把这些核心内容呈现出来!

　　因此，我们认为把文章写成四段话较为合理，因为能凸显出两个核心部分：

　　第一段：Background. 引入现象，略加阐述，点到为止，不可赘述(~20 words)。

　　第二段(核心之一!!!)：Summary. 一句话说明人们持不同观点+概括正反方观点(70-80 words)。

　　第三段(核心之二!!!)：Comments. 过渡句+自己的观点(~90-100 words)

　　第四段：Conclusion. 总结全文(~20 words)。

　　注意：有些学校的老师希望分成经典的三段式，这都没有问题。作文本来就是开放式的东西，而且题目也并没有告诉我们要写几段话!分成几段并不是主要问题，只要你的作文能合理地体现核心即可!所以请不要再询问某某参考书上为什么这样写?请用脑也用心去思考。举个例子：有老师建议把我以上的第一段和第二段和在一起，原理上当然可以，个人觉得开头过于长了，结构不太好看，但是老师的建议仍然可以。

　　2017专四作文每段该怎么写?

　　第一段：Background

　　给大家几个经典句型，自由组合即可。

　　Family education may exert a great impact on children’s behavior.

　　The past several years has witnessed the widespread use of genetically modified food.

　　Learning math plays an important role in everyday life.

　　This issue has captured numerous attentions from the general public.

　　Children’s education has recently arisen as one of the essential problems.

　　比如：Recently, the use of Chinese characters, traditional or simplified, has attracted numerous attentions from politicians and scholars alike. Obviously this issue will exert profound influence on our national education. (29 words)

　　第二段：Summary

　　第一部分(以下五句任意选一句)：

　　(1) There has been much controversy over _______.

　　(2) When it comes to _______, opinions vary greatly.

　　(3) ____ has given rise to a heated discussion.

　　(4) A heated debate has sprung up on ______.

　　(5) _______ has caused quite a stir among the general public.

　　第二部分：

　　Some people argue/suggest/insist that _______.

　　On the contrary, other believe/maintain that ______.

　　注意事项：

　　不要把材料里的所有观点都写入总结;

　　只需要提炼材料里的Key Words，然后组成句子;

　　篇幅占约1/3(即70-80字左右)，最多不能超过50%(100字);

　　不要完全照抄材料，进行一定的替换，包括词语替换、句式替换;

　　尽量简洁明了，让人一目了然。

　　比如：With regards to the controversial issue of whether we should revive traditional characters or continue using simplified ones, opinions vary greatly. Some people believe that traditional characters can better represent traditional culture, help to interpret ancient Chinese works, and unite Chinese people from all over the world. On the contrary, others argue that the simplified form, which is easier to learn and more convenient to use, can not only preserve traditional value but also lead to better communication. (78 words)

　　第三段：Comments

　　重大注意：文章是一个有机的整体，所以这里切勿自顾自论述，开头应该进行结合上段，进行一个简单的过渡，否则会导致大量的失分!

　　第一种写法思路：过渡句+犀利，即一边倒，但是尽可能使用辩证的说法。

　　(1) When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one.

　　第二种写作思路：过渡句+中庸，即支持正反。

　　(2) When considering opinions of both sides, I find they are of equal weight.

　　比如：As the saying goes, “Every coin has its two sides”. There is no surprise that there are different opinions about the use of characters. However, as a college student, I am convinced that we should keep the simplified characters. To begin with, it is generally acknowledged that in mainland China simplified characters have been extensively applied in school education as well as in our daily life. If we instead promote the use of traditional characters, there would be language chaos in our country. Besides, efforts should be made to maintain the simplified form among Chinese people, since it is used by overwhelmingly large population. (104 words)

　　第四段：总结

　　注意：简单小结!

　　比如：To sum up, it is the simplified characters that we should advocate to use. Traditional ones should be left for the experts to study, not for the general public. (29 words)

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