03 第三步：复盘总结

不断通过复盘思路、框架和可替换的论点，你将会总结出自己有规律的套路，不仅可以轻车熟路地快速成文，还可以避免使用市面上的模板带来的低分。

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（描述图表）In this chart, we can see the mobile phone subscriptions in developed countries have a steady and slight increase from 1990 to 2007 and then remain constant in 2008. Meanwhile the mobile phone subscriptions in developing countries have witnessed a slow increase from 1990 to 2004 and then a great surge from 2004 to 2007: the biggest surge happens from 2005 to 2006.

（表达观点）This chart reflects different developing modes of mobile phone industry in developed and developing countries. The developed countries have a limited number of populations, most of whom are well-educated.

Therefore, the spreading of the mobile phone service is efficient and soon the market is saturated. On the other hand, at the top of the list is the recent huge improvement of the people's living standards in developing countries. It is reported that, with the rapid economic growth of these countries, mobile phone has become a life necessity rather than a luxury.

Moreover, we must admit that the developing countries has a far more larger population and accordingly a larger demand for mobile services than developed countries.

（总结）As discussed above, it is not surprising to see this difference. And I firmly believe that this established trend will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.

中文译文：

在这个图表中，我们可以看到，发达国家的手机用户在1990年至2007年期间有了稳定而轻微的增长，然后在2008年保持不变。与此同时，发展中国家的移动电话用户在1990年至2004年期间增长缓慢，在2004年至2007年期间急剧增加：最大的增长发生在2005年至2006年。

这张图表反映了发达国家和发展中国家移动电话产业不同的发展模式。发达国家的人口有限，其中大多数受过良好教育。因此，手机服务的普及效率很高，市场很快就饱和了。另一方面，图中最明显的是，发展中国家人民生活水平最近的大幅度改善。据报道，随着这些国家经济的快速发展，手机已成为一种生活必需品，而不是奢侈品。此外，我们必须承认，发展中国家的人口比发达国家大得多，因此对移动服务的需求也比发达国家大。

正如上面所讨论的，看到这种差异并不奇怪。我深信在未来数年，这个既定的趋势仍会持续一段时间。

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As it is shown in the bar chart above, dramatic changes have taken place in the autos market shares within two years (from 2008 to 2009). The most obvious change was the market share of national brand, which had increased nearly by 10%, while Japan's autos market share decreased roughly by 10%. The percentage of the US autos remained stable between 2008 and 2009.

The contributing factors for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. Above all, as the development of technique and knowledge in native companies, a growing number of autos corporation developed many quality autos. Therefore, the national people changed the attitude to the native brands and acknowledge them.

What' more, an overwhelming majority of people have been affected by the country patriotism ideology, partly owing to some actions of Japan triggering the emotion of people. Finally, Toyota brake error accidents significantly affects Japanese autos' reputations and images.

Safety concerns drove customers away from Japanese products. Additionally, Fuel price drove consumers away from those American petrol digging and luxury autos. So it is not difficult to observe their steady performance.

Based on what has been discussed above, we may reasonably conclude that the tendency described in graphic will continue for quite a long time. Hopefully, government could offer more friendly policies to China autos manufacturers to encourage quality improvement and technology innovation.

▶中文译文：如上面的柱状图所示，在两年内（从2008年至2009年），汽车市场份额发生了巨大的变化。最明显的变化是民族品牌的市场份额增长了近10%，而日本汽车市场占有率下降了约10%。2008年至2009年期间，美国汽车的比例保持稳定。

造成这一现象的原因可归纳如下。首先，随着国内汽车企业技术和知识的发展，越来越多的汽车企业开发出了许多高质量的汽车。因此，中国人改变了对本土品牌的态度，并承认了他们。更有甚者，绝大多数人都受到国家爱国主义思想的影响，部分原因是日本的某些行为引发了人们的情绪。最后，丰田刹车失误事故对日本汽车的声誉和形象产生了重大影响。对安全的担心使顾客远离日本产品。此外，燃油价格驱使消费者远离那些美国耗油的豪华汽车。所以我们可以看到国产汽车的稳定业绩。

基于上面所讨论的，我们可以合理地得出结论，图形描述的趋势将持续相当长的时间。希望政府能为中国汽车制造商提供更友好的政策，以鼓励质量改进和技术创新。

As can be seen from the table, there are some differences among staff of the company with regard to the satisfaction of their work.

Based upon the data of the table, most people under 40 are unclear(50%) or dissatisfied(33.3%) with their job, and 64% of those between 40 to 50, are not satisfied and no one feel satisfied at all. For people over 50, the degree of satisfaction largely exceeds the other groups, amounting to 40%.

Such difference may be rooted in the following reasons. First, middle-aged people face more pressure to support the family, both the children and the senior, so that they neglect to enjoy in work.

Second, the senior citizens has developed a lot in personality, so they are more prone to see the optimistic aspects of the work. Last but not the least, the fact cannot be neglected that most of the staff under their forties cannot see the slightest prospect of promotion.

In view of the argument above , I strongly believe that the staff's attitude towards satisfaction with their work reflects the situation of their work. Therefore, the company should take measures for the staffs so that they can find more satisfaction with work.

▶中文译文：从上表可以看出，公司的员工对工作的满意度有所不同。根据表中的数据，40岁以下的大多数人对工作满意度模糊的（50%）或不满意（33.3%），40至50岁的人中64%不满意，没有人感到完全满意。对于50岁以上的人，满意度大大超过其他群体，达到40%。

这种差异可能源于以下原因。首先，中年人面临更多的赡养家庭的压力，包括孩子和老人，使他们忽视了在工作中的乐趣。其次，老年人的个性已经有了很大的发展，所以他们更容易看到工作中乐观的一面。最后但并非最不重要的是，不能忽视这样一个事实：大多数40多岁的工作人员看不到任何晋升的希望。

鉴于上述论点，我坚信，工作人员对工作满意的态度反映了他们的工作情况。因此，公司应该对员工采取措施，使他们对工作更加满意

As is illustrated by the figure in the chart, the number of college students doing part-time jobs has been on rise steadily from 66.77% to 88.24% during the four -year university life. From the change in the chart, it goes without saying that more and more college students choose to engage in outside programs recently.

Considering these changes, we can find several main reasons. Why the enthusiasm of freshman is lower than their elder classmates is due to the fact that intensive course planning and resourceful campus life occupy their plenty of spare time.

From the perspective of graduate students, they have much more time for taking a part-time job when they have required assignment finished.

But another important factor that cannot ignored is that as the graduation date is around the corner, students realize that they need to gain more working experience, which undoubtedly would improve their competitiveness and may facilitate them to obtain a better job.

From the changes in the charts, it is easy for us to predict that more and more college students will walk out their home and throw themselves into more various vacation activities.

▶中文译文：从图表中的数字可以看出，在四年的大学生活中，大学生从事兼职工作的人数从66.77%稳步上升到88.24%。从图表的变化，不言而喻，最近越来越多的大学生选择从事课外项目。

考虑到这些变化，我们可以找到几个主要原因。大一学生的学习热情之所以比高年级同学低，是因为强化课程计划和丰富的校园生活占据了他们大量的业余时间。从研究生的角度来看，当他们完成了作业后，他们有更多的时间做兼职工作。不过，另一个不容忽视的重要因素是，由于毕业日期已近，学生认识到他们需要获得更多的工作经验，这无疑会提高他们的竞争力，并可协助他们找到更好的工作。

从图表的变化来看，我们很容易预测越来越多的大学生会走出家门，投身到更多各种各样的假期活动中去。

What is clearly presented in the bar chart is the remarkable changes that have taken place in the population both in rural and urban areas in China from 1990,2000 to 2010.

The number of urban residents was on a dramatic increase from 300 million in 1990 to 660 million or so in 2010,while rural population decreased slightly from about 820 million to 680 million or so in the same period.

It is not difficult to come up with some possible factors contributing to this trend. On the one hand, with a fast pace of industrialization and economic development, more workforce are needed in the city's all walks of life.

Therefore, it is of no difficulty for rural residents to find a decent position in cities with a generous salary. On the other hand, the economy in the rural districts is comparative less developed and thus lacking the opportunity to make money and pursue their future. As a result, an increasing number of folks are trying to escape this destiny by flocking into the urban areas.

Given the analyses above, It can be predicted that such established trend will surely continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years until it comes to a reasonable ceiling.

▶中文译文：

这个柱状图清楚显示了中国城乡人口从10万到2010年发生的显着变化。城市居民数量从1990年的3亿显著增长到2000年的6.6亿，急剧增加到2010年的3亿人左右，农村人口在同一时期从大约减少到6.600000.0亿人左右，然而在1990年到2000年，乡镇人口稍微地从8.2亿下降到6.8亿。

分析可能造成这种趋势的因素并不难。一方面，随着工业化和经济发展的步伐加快，城市中各行各业都需要更多的劳动力。因此，农村居民在薪水丰厚的城市找到体面的工作并不困难。另一方面，农村地区的经济比较落后，缺乏赚钱和追求未来的机会。因此，越来越多的人涌入城市，企图逃离这种命运。

根据上述分析，可以预测，在未来几年内，这种既定趋势肯定会持续相当长的时间，直到达到合理的上限。

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