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突破10 应用文写作第一部分：重点难点重点掌握与运用书信写作多训练推荐信，建议信，邀请信，感谢信，申请信，道歉信，演讲稿，通知信、告知信等应用文写作。难点词汇升级多使用高级词汇，高级词汇指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如frustration, awkward, awfully, concern等。这些词汇为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。难点句式升级写作中精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。固定句式(如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等)、定语从句、现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映出考生的语言运用能力。难点逻辑升级衔接过渡词能使语言连贯性得以实现。句与句、段与段之间恰当地使用衔接过渡词不仅可以起到承上启下的作用，也可以使文章脉络走向更为清晰明朗。所以在写作中运用过渡词，对写好文章有着重要意义。第二部分：易错失分易错点1：审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点应用文中主要以以考查各类书信或电子邮件为主，如建议信、申请信、感谢信等。但近年高考也越来约多的涉及开放式或半开放式作文的考查。即命题人只给出一个话题，而不限制写作内容。有的考生盲目套用所谓写作模板，文不对题，造成扣分降档。因此，考生要想获得高分，需要认真审题，明确写作体裁，避免格式错误，如将图表类作文写成建议信等。根据写作内容，明确文章结构，做到条理清晰，布局合理。而很多考生没有考虑到结构这一点，只是想到哪，就写到哪，造成文章显得无层次感。或者盲目分段，达到五六段，显得结构混乱，影响得分。一般应用文大都采用“三段式”写作模式，从整体布局先胜一筹。另外，文章开头应当开门见山，直接点题，结尾与开头首尾呼应，使文章整体更加和谐统一。易错点2：语言平淡或复杂易混易错点良好的开端就成功了一半。好的开头和结尾是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。考生使用词汇过于笼统、信息指向不明确，句子平淡无奇，全是简单句的堆砌，没有高级句式或经常的词汇和短语，毫无亮点。而有的考生为了追求所谓的长句、高级句式，一篇文章充斥的都是复杂的长难句式，阅读体验较差，也会影响得分。因此，应当运用精彩的开头和结尾，多变的句式和词汇，有了风头、猪肚和豹尾，自然会提升文章的整体档次。易错点3：句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点考生因基础词汇和句型掌握不牢，导致无法正确运用正确的语言，把所找出的要点表达清楚。为突出主题，减少错误，除了在平时学习中大量积累词汇、短语和句型外，在造句时还应当使用与话题相关的词语和句型。最后检查单词拼写、语法以及衔接等方面是否存在错误。易错点4：卷面易混易错点整洁优美的卷面会成为加分的一个因素。有点考生不注意规范书写，字母大小随意，字迹潦草不清，乱涂乱画，书写马虎等都会给阅卷者留下“脏、乱、差”等印象。第三部分：猜题押题猜题押题理由根据新高考三年的考情分析，应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一，其中以书信、电子邮件最为常见。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。预计2024年高考应用文写作考查形式仍以书信开放性为主。为此，特推出以下应用文写作题，达到事半功倍的效果。（一）近期哈尔滨成为网红旅游打卡地，假定你是李华，想在寒假期间邀请美国交换生Tom一起去哈尔滨游玩。请你给他写一封英文电子邮件，内容包括：(1) 邀请同行，商议出行日期和方式；(2) 询问御寒措施和注意事项。注意：(1) 写作词数应为80左右；(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,I hope this email finds you well.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best regards.Yours,Li Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Tom,I hope this email finds you well. I’m thrilled to invite you to join me on a trip to the popular tourist destination of Harbin. It would be fantastic to have you accompany me and create unforgettable memories together.I propose we visit Harbin from 20th to 27th in January, but I am flexible and open to your availability. As for transportation, we can consider taking a train or a flight depending on what works best for both of us.As we will visit the city during the winter season, I want to ask about the cold weather precautions and any special considerations we should keep in mind to stay warm and safe.Looking forward to your reply and hoping we can make this trip happen!Best regards.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给美国交换生Tom写一封英文电子邮件,邀请他一起去哈尔滨游玩，需涵盖发出邀请、商议出行日期和方式、询问御寒措施和注意事项。【详解】1. 词汇积累极好的：fantastic→wonderful, incredible提议：propose→make a proposal至于：as for→in the matter of, with respect to考虑：consider→think about, give thought to记住：keep sth. in mind→bear sth. in mind2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：I’m thrilled to invite you to join me on a trip to the popular tourist destination of Harbin.拓展句：It gives me a thrill to invite you to join me on a trip to the popular tourist destination of Harbin.【点睛】[高分句型1] As for transportation, we can consider taking a train or a flight depending on what works best for both of us. (运用了what引导名词性从句作depending on的宾语)[高分句型2] As we will visit the city during the winter season, I want to ask about the cold weather precautions and any special considerations we should keep in mind to stay warm and safe. (运用了As引导原因状语从句、关系代词引导限制性定语从句并被省略)（二）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike一直鼓励你要多进行体育锻炼，并提出了很多有益的建议，你因此而开始重视运动，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 感谢他的帮助；2. 你选择的运动及原因；3. 运动对你的影响和意义。注意：词数80左右。Dear Mike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your consistent encouragement and advice regarding my physical exercise.I have chosen to include running in my daily routine. Running offers a perfect way of exercise, which is essential for maintaining a healthy body and mind. Additionally, running provides a sense of freedom and stress relief. Now I feel more energetic and regular exercise has given me a sense of accomplishment and pride.Thanks again for your invaluable guidance and support. I look forward to continuing our conversation about exercise and other topics in the future.Yours sincerelyLi Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，你的美国朋友Mike一直鼓励你要多进行体育锻炼，并提出了很多有益的建议，你因此而开始重视运动，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 感谢他的帮助；2. 你选择的运动及原因；3. 运动对你的影响和意义。【详解】1.词汇积累感激：gratitude→appreciation持续的：consistent→continuous非常重要的：essential→vital此外：additionally →besides2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Additionally, running provides a sense of freedom and stress relief. Now I feel more energetic and regular exercise has given me a sense of accomplishment and pride.拓展句：Additionally, running provides a sense of freedom and stress relief, which makes me more energetic and gives me a sense of accomplishment and pride.【点睛】[高分句型1] Running offers a perfect way of exercise, which is essential for maintaining a healthy body and mind. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] I look forward to continuing our conversation about exercise and other topics in the future. (运用了动名词作宾语)（三）假定你是国际部环保社社长李华，近期，你打算在校内开展一次 “减塑” 社团活动，请给国际部负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信。内容包括：1. 活动时间，地点;2. 活动内容；3. 希望获准。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。参考词汇: 国际部环保社 the International Department's Environment Protection Club 减塑Less PlasticsDear Mr. Smith，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I am Li Hua, leader of the International Department’s Environment Protection Club. Our association has decided to hold a “Less Plastics” activity, so I am writing to apply for your permission.In order to raise the awareness of (提高 意识) protecting the environment among the teachers and students, the “Less Plastics” activity is scheduled to be held next Monday on the school playground from 8 a. m. to 11a. m. Initially, a speech about the great damages that using plastics has caused will be delivered, appealing to the students to reduce the consumption of plastic in our daily life. Following that, comes the meaningful activity where the students take immediate action to collect the plastic waste on the campus.I’m sure the activity will have a positive effect on the students and teachers. I would appreciate it if our application could get your permission.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给国际部负责人Mr. Smith写一封信，申请在校内开展一次 “减塑” 社团活动。其内容包括：活动时间，地点、活动内容和希望获准。【详解】1.词汇积累决定：decide →determine起初：initially →at the beginning导致：cause→result in有意义的：meaningful→significant2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： I am Li Hua, leader of the International Department’s Environment Protection Club.拓展句：I am Li Hua, who is the leader of the International Department’s Environment Protection Club.【点睛】【高分句型1】Initially, a speech about the great damages that using plastics has caused will be delivered, appealing to the students to reduce the consumption of plastic in our daily life.（运用了that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语）【高分句型2】I’m sure the activity will have a positive effect on the students and teachers. （运用了省略that的宾语从句）（四）假定你是李华，在学校最近举办的英语配音比赛中获得一等奖，即将参加颁奖典礼，请你写一篇英语获奖感言。内容包括：1. 感谢认可和帮助；2. 参赛感悟：3. 继续进步。注意：1. 字数80个左右；2. 开头已为你写好。英语配音比赛English Fun Dubbing CompetitionDear judges, teachers and fellow students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear judges, teachers, and fellow students,I feel privileged to receive the first prize in the English Fun Dubbing Competition. This award is not only a recognition of my efforts, but also a testament to the hard work and dedication of my teammates and the guidance of our teachers.The process of preparing for the competition has been a rewarding experience that has allowed me to grow into a fluent English speaker as well as a creative thinker. This award belongs to everyone who has supported me all the way. Without their belief in me, I would not be where I am today.I will continue to strive to improve my English skills and share my love for the language with others. Thank you all for being a part of my journey.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇获奖感言。【详解】1.词汇积累荣幸的：privileged→honoured指导：guidance→ instruction值得的：rewarding→ worthwhile热爱： love →enthusiasm2.句式拓展陈述句变倒装句原句：This award is not only a recognition of my efforts, but also a testament to the hard work and dedication of my teammates and the guidance of our teachers.拓展句：Not only is this award a recognition of my efforts, but also a testament to the hard work and dedication of my teammates and the guidance of our teachers.【点睛】【高分句型1】The process of preparing for the competition has been a rewarding experience that has allowed me to grow into a fluent English speaker as well as a creative thinker.（运用了that引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】Without their belief in me, I would not be where I am today.（运用了虚拟语气）（五）假定你是皖南八中校英文报《先锋》（Pioneer）编辑，受你校学生会委托撰写一份以珍爱湿地（Treasure Wetland）为主题的海报设计大赛通知。内容包括：1. 大赛目的；2. 作品要求；3. 参赛方式等。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当补充细节，使行文流畅。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】NoticeIn a bid to raise our environmental awareness and protect precious wetland resources, a poster design competition themed “Treasure Wetland” is organized by the Student Union.To begin with, originality, by all means, is the first requirement. Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring and thought-provoking, clearly illustrating the significance of the wetland and the urgency to protect it. Moreover, a powerful slogan is also preferred, which will make your work more persuasive and impressive.All the students are welcome to submit their entries to Pioneer@ before 10th January, 2024. Only one work per individual is allowed. The winning works will be announced on February 2nd, 2024, World Wetland Day, in this newspaper.Looking forward to your participation.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为皖南八中校英文报《先锋》（Pioneer）编辑，受你校学生会委托撰写一份以珍爱湿地（Treasure Wetland）为主题的海报设计大赛通知。【详解】1.词汇积累旨在，目的是：In a bid to→ With the aim to此外：Moreover → What’s more比赛：competition→ match提高，增强：raise→ enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：In a bid to raise our environmental awareness and protect precious wetland resources, a poster design competition themed “Treasure Wetland” is organized by the Student Union.拓展句：In a bid to raise our environmental awareness and protect precious wetland resources, a poster design competition whose theme is “Treasure Wetland” is organized by the Student Union.【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, a powerful slogan is also preferred, which will make your work more persuasive and impressive.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring and thought-provoking, clearly illustrating the significance of the wetland and the urgency to protect it.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）（六）假定你是学校英文报“Growing Pains”栏目的编辑，最近陆续收到学生来信，反映家长过多干涉自己的学习。请你写一封回信，对此现象进行分析并给这些学生提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Troubled,From your letters I’ve learnt that your parents care too much about your study, which annoys you a lot.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LovingEditor【答案】Dear troubled,From your letters I’ve learnt that your parents care too much about your study, which annoys you a lot. Actually, it is very common in every family, but it is not a big problem if we approach it properly.Parents intervene in our study for various reasons. For one thing, they attach great importance to our education in the hope that we have a bright future. But sometimes they display so much anxiety, although unintentionally, that they really stress us out. For another, we tend to avoid communication with our parents, especially about our academic work, leaving them more eager to know how we are getting on.Therefore, it is of great significance to understand our parents’ anxiety and embrace their helpful guidance with sincerity. Additionally, heart-to-heart communication helps a lot. We are supposed to share with our parents the challenges we encounter and the progress we achieve in our study. Hopefully, what used to be an annoyance will turn into a blessing.LovingEditor【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生代替学校英文报“Growing Pains”栏目的编辑，给有困扰的学生回信，分析现象并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累：各种各样的：various→a variety of/varieties of/a wide range of往往会：tend to do→have a tendency to do渴望的：eager→thirsty/starving此外：additionally→in addition/what’s more/furthermore2.句式拓展：简单句变复合句原句：Therefore, it is of great significance to understand our parents’ anxiety and embrace their helpful guidance with sincerity.拓展句：Therefore, what is significant is that we should understand our parents’ anxiety and embrace their helpful guidance with sincerity.【点睛】【高分句型1】From your letters I’ve learnt that your parents care too much about your study, which annoys you a lot.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。)【高分句型2】For another, we tend to avoid communication with our parents, especially about our academic work, leaving them more eager to know how we are getting on.(运用了现在分词作结果状语。)突破10 应用文写作第一部分：重点难点重点掌握与运用书信写作多训练推荐信，建议信，邀请信，感谢信，申请信，道歉信，演讲稿，通知信、告知信等应用文写作。难点词汇升级多使用高级词汇，高级词汇指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如frustration, awkward, awfully, concern等。这些词汇为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。难点句式升级写作中精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。固定句式(如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等)、定语从句、现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映出考生的语言运用能力。难点逻辑升级衔接过渡词能使语言连贯性得以实现。句与句、段与段之间恰当地使用衔接过渡词不仅可以起到承上启下的作用，也可以使文章脉络走向更为清晰明朗。所以在写作中运用过渡词，对写好文章有着重要意义。第二部分：易错失分易错点1：审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点应用文中主要以以考查各类书信或电子邮件为主，如建议信、申请信、感谢信等。但近年高考也越来约多的涉及开放式或半开放式作文的考查。即命题人只给出一个话题，而不限制写作内容。有的考生盲目套用所谓写作模板，文不对题，造成扣分降档。因此，考生要想获得高分，需要认真审题，明确写作体裁，避免格式错误，如将图表类作文写成建议信等。根据写作内容，明确文章结构，做到条理清晰，布局合理。而很多考生没有考虑到结构这一点，只是想到哪，就写到哪，造成文章显得无层次感。或者盲目分段，达到五六段，显得结构混乱，影响得分。一般应用文大都采用“三段式”写作模式，从整体布局先胜一筹。另外，文章开头应当开门见山，直接点题，结尾与开头首尾呼应，使文章整体更加和谐统一。易错点2：语言平淡或复杂易混易错点良好的开端就成功了一半。好的开头和结尾是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。考生使用词汇过于笼统、信息指向不明确，句子平淡无奇，全是简单句的堆砌，没有高级句式或经常的词汇和短语，毫无亮点。而有的考生为了追求所谓的长句、高级句式，一篇文章充斥的都是复杂的长难句式，阅读体验较差，也会影响得分。因此，应当运用精彩的开头和结尾，多变的句式和词汇，有了风头、猪肚和豹尾，自然会提升文章的整体档次。易错点3：句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点考生因基础词汇和句型掌握不牢，导致无法正确运用正确的语言，把所找出的要点表达清楚。为突出主题，减少错误，除了在平时学习中大量积累词汇、短语和句型外，在造句时还应当使用与话题相关的词语和句型。最后检查单词拼写、语法以及衔接等方面是否存在错误。易错点4：卷面易混易错点整洁优美的卷面会成为加分的一个因素。有点考生不注意规范书写，字母大小随意，字迹潦草不清，乱涂乱画，书写马虎等都会给阅卷者留下“脏、乱、差”等印象。第三部分：猜题押题猜题押题理由根据新高考三年的考情分析，应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一，其中以书信、电子邮件最为常见。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。预计2024年高考应用文写作考查形式仍以书信开放性为主。为此，特推出以下应用文写作题，达到事半功倍的效果。（一）近期哈尔滨成为网红旅游打卡地，假定你是李华，想在寒假期间邀请美国交换生Tom一起去哈尔滨游玩。请你给他写一封英文电子邮件，内容包括：(1) 邀请同行，商议出行日期和方式；(2) 询问御寒措施和注意事项。注意：(1) 写作词数应为80左右；(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,I hope this email finds you well.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best regards.Yours,Li Hua（二）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike一直鼓励你要多进行体育锻炼，并提出了很多有益的建议，你因此而开始重视运动，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 感谢他的帮助；2. 你选择的运动及原因；3. 运动对你的影响和意义。注意：词数80左右。Dear Mike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua（三）假定你是国际部环保社社长李华，近期，你打算在校内开展一次 “减塑” 社团活动，请给国际部负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信。内容包括：1. 活动时间，地点;2. 活动内容；3. 希望获准。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。参考词汇: 国际部环保社 the International Department's Environment Protection Club 减塑Less PlasticsDear Mr. Smith，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua（四）假定你是李华，在学校最近举办的英语配音比赛中获得一等奖，即将参加颁奖典礼，请你写一篇英语获奖感言。内容包括：1. 感谢认可和帮助；2. 参赛感悟：3. 继续进步。注意：1. 字数80个左右；2. 开头已为你写好。英语配音比赛English Fun Dubbing CompetitionDear judges, teachers and fellow students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）假定你是皖南八中校英文报《先锋》（Pioneer）编辑，受你校学生会委托撰写一份以珍爱湿地（Treasure Wetland）为主题的海报设计大赛通知。内容包括：1. 大赛目的；2. 作品要求；3. 参赛方式等。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当补充细节，使行文流畅。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（六）假定你是学校英文报“Growing Pains”栏目的编辑，最近陆续收到学生来信，反映家长过多干涉自己的学习。请你写一封回信，对此现象进行分析并给这些学生提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Troubled,From your letters I’ve learnt that your parents care too much about your study, which annoys you a 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