Nonetheless, I still believe that old retirees should leave some inheritance for their children rather than spend everything on themselves. The main reason is that it provides their children more financial stability, giving them a safety net to fall back on. This is important because, despite their best efforts, people often live hard lives and any financial support could help considerably. On top of that, when parents leave an inheritance for their children, it shows love and kindness. It’s a very unselfish act that helps strengthen the family bond while parents are still alive and leaves a lasting memory when they are gone.

For these reasons, I believe that even though old retirees should spend money on themselves, they should also leave some inheritance for their children.

词汇积累

题目思路解析

从题目可以看出，这是一篇利弊类的大作文，话题属于社会类。遇到问“积极或消极”的题目时，一般有两种写作方法：一个是“一边倒”类型，即：主体段部分只针对己方观点进行论述；另一个是“双边”类型，即：第一个主体段先承认对方观点存在的好处，另一个主体段论述己方观点。如本篇范文，作者就使用了“双边”的主体段结构。

开头段中，作者运用了 it is ture that ...的句型来引出背景，并将题目改写，比如：将people who retire from work改写为retirees等。此外，在首段亮明观点更有助于考官理解考生的思路。

在第一个主体段中，作者针对“老年人退休后为自己花钱”的好处提出了两点论点，运用论点+解释论证+举例说明的方法使文章逻辑严谨、具有说服力。第二个主体段结构与前段大致相同，指出退休人员为孩子留下财产可以给他们一些经济上的依靠、表达自己对他们的爱。这两段中的连接词，如on one hand, nonetheless等使得文章观点清晰、逻辑严谨，十分值得学习和模仿。

最后，结尾段作者重申了自己的观点，做到收尾呼应。

注：本文为老师原创范文，未经授权禁止商用。

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