雅思作文总跑题?必须先搞懂这6大审题陷阱!

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雅思作文总跑题?必须先搞懂这6大审题陷阱!

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备考雅思写作期间,很多考生也许会遇到不会审题和跑题的问题。今天,趴趴雅思的Tina老师将从大作文和小作文的角度为大家全方位解析常见的审题陷阱,教会大家如何避坑,突破写作瓶颈期

本节课程安排

大作文常见陷阱大作文避坑指南小作文常见陷阱小作文避坑指南1、大作文常见陷阱

雅思大作文的陷阱主要出现在审题方面,因此我们想要避开陷阱,首先要明确大作文在审题方面的要求:Task Response(任务回应)

Address the task only partially; the format may be inappropriateExpresses a position but the development is not always clear and be no conclusions drawnPresents some main ideas but these are limited and not sufficiently developed; there may be irrelevant detail

5分标准分析:

只覆盖题目中的一部分,格式可能不恰当表达了立场,但是展开论证过程中不总是清晰的,也没有结论。给出了一些主要的观点,但是比较有限制,也没有充分展开;存在不相关的细节。

Addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than othersPresents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive Presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear

6分标准分析:

覆盖题目中所有的部分,不能少写,有的部分可能比别的部分更全面。表达相关的立场,结论可能不清楚或重复。给出相关的观点,但是有一些可能没有充分展开或不够清晰。

Addresses all parts of the taskPresents a clear position throughout the responsePresents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to overgeneralise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.

7分标准分析:

覆盖题目中所有的部分表达明确的立场给出、延伸并支持主要观点,但是可能会过度概括或观点缺少重点。

如果你在雅思学习的过程中还是存在一些问题,比如在口语/写作/词汇量/阅读等方面比较薄弱,可以限时免费参加下面这个训练营,有雅思前考官主讲的口写训练营、也有口语/写作/词汇/阅读的专项训练营,5种训练营轮换开营,都是丰富教学经验的老师亲自带队,帮你用5天的时间,快速掌握方法,让备考效率有一个质的提升。

思考:下面三道例题中,哪道题的审题思路是偏题的?

1. The Internet has great influence on shopping, job and communication, so people do not have to meet friends face to face but by internet. Is it positive or negative?

审题思路:网络很方便(网购、工作效率高) vs 面对面很重要(加强情感纽带)

2. Some people say that it is better to teach language students in small classes, while others think that the number of students does not matter. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

审题思路:小班的优势(因材施教) vs大班的优势(合作交流)

3. The best way for governments to solve the traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

审题思路:优点(私家车减少、环保) vs缺点(浪费钱)

三道题的审题思路都有一定程度的错误,掉入了大作文审题的陷阱。接下来老师将以各题为例,详细解答具体的陷阱。

常见陷阱1——注意题型

The Internet has great influence on shopping, job and communication, so people do not have to meet friends face to face but by internet. Is it positive or negative?

网络对购物、工作和沟通产生了巨大的影响,因此人们不需要面对面见朋友,只需要通过网络即可。这是积极还是消极?

错误审题思路:网络很方便(网购、工作效率高) vs 面对面很重要(加强情感纽带)错误分析:只看到了主干部分就急匆匆地定下立意。雅思作文要求回答问题,本题问的是积极还是消极,应该回答人们现在不需要面对面见朋友而是网络社交是积极还是消极。在审题时一定要看清题型,找准对象。

相关题目:

a) More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV program to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development. (2021.4.3)

正确审题思路:科技的积极or消极

b) Some people think it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, while others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because the information can be seen on TV and on the Internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. (2021.6.26)

正确审题思路:传统的优点vs科技的优点

c) Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since computer technology is now replacing their function.' To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2021.7.1)

正确审题思路:科技的优点vs传统的优点

总结:要看清题目的问题,根据具体问题判断题型,再进行回答。

常见陷阱2——看清题干

Some people say that it is better to teach language students in small classes, while others think that the number of students does not matter. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

一些人说在小班里学生学语言会更好,但是其他人认为学生的数量不重要。讨论双方观点,给出你自己的看法。

错误审题思路:小班的优势(因材施教) vs大班的优势(合作交流)错误分析:一些人认为小班教学好,因此的确要分析小班的优势,但是其他人只是认为数量不重要,并不等于认为大班教学好,因此不能论述大班的优势。建议思路:小班的优势vs 其他因素更重要(如教师专业水平)

相关题目:

a) Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, while other people think that taking part in individual sports is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (2021.10.09)

正确审题思路:团队运动vs个人运动

b) Some people think advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views.(2021.05.29)

正确审题思路:广告的优点vs广告的缺点

c) Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (2021.07.24)

正确审题思路:依赖的原因vs独立的原因

总结:在审题时,一定要看清题干中双方的观点内容,不能看完一方的观点后,默认另一方是对立的观点。

常见陷阱3——典型措辞

The best way for governments to solve the traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

政府解决交通拥堵的最好方法就是提供全天候的免费公交。你是否同意?

错误审题思路:优点(私家车减少、环保) vs缺点(浪费钱)错误分析:要反驳免费公交并不是最好的方法,首先要指出其缺点,再提出更好的解决方法。环保的这个点也偏题了。建议思路:缺点+更好的方法

相关题目:

a) Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2021.5.8)

b) Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn the language of it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2021.5.20)

c) Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (C9T3)

总结:the best way是雅思写作的典型措辞,不是要分析优缺点,而是要证明题干的内容不是最好的方法。在论证过程中,除了指出题干内容的缺点,还要给出更好的解决办法。

如果你在雅思学习的过程中还是存在一些问题,比如在口语/写作/词汇量/阅读等方面比较薄弱,可以限时免费参加下面这个训练营,有雅思前考官主讲的口写训练营、也有口语/写作/词汇/阅读的专项训练营,5种训练营轮换开营,都是丰富教学经验的老师亲自带队,帮你用5天的时间,快速掌握方法,让备考效率有一个质的提升。

2、大作文避坑指南——仔细审题

口诀:逐字翻译不脑补,一定要看清题型。问什么就答什么,不能多也不能少。

常见题型问法:

同意类: To what extent do you agree or disagree?优缺点: Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? / Is it a positive or negative trend?讨论类: Discuss both views and give your own opinion.说明文: What are the reasons? What can be done?混合类: What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative? / Do you agree or disagree? What can be done?

3、小作文常见陷阱

常见陷阱1——注意时态

分析:找时态时,关注表示时间的词。

本题题干的第一句话中become是一般现在时,而后一句中affext使用了一般过去时。

题干中存在两种时态,左边饼状图对应一般现在时,右边表格对应一般过去时。

当题干提及多种时态时,要具体对应到表格当中,不同的表格可能会使用的时态也不同。

当题干中没有明确提及时间时,考生要记住,表达观点和状态时使用一般现在时;描述发生过的事件或动作时采用一般过去时。

常见陷阱2——注意单位

分析:本题的陷阱在于数量的单位。

表格中给出的信息是millions of euros,但是英文中描述具体的数字时,hundred, thousand, million等都不能加s。

因此,在描述的时候只能写成1.5 million(of the euros)。

常见陷阱3——注意对象

分析:图标右边用作解释的方框中的信息并没有给出清楚的对象。

本题的对象是人,而题目给出出的信息是动词短语,在描述的时候不能照抄,可以改成the percentage of people who bought…或the percentage of people having bought…

分析:本题的对象是人,但是涉及要两类人,因此要确定比例的分子和分母,什么人占了什么人的比例。

本题的分母是某个年龄层的人(adults of different age groups),分子是在某个年龄层中每天上网的人(who used the Internet everyday)。

具体的判断方法是将所有的分子的比例加起来看是否等于一百,分子不全时总数要小于一百。

本题中如果将各年龄层的人的比例加起来,远远超过一百,所以不是分子。

而各年龄层每天上网的人的比例都在一百以下,因此得出了正确的判断。

4、小作文避坑指南——仔细审题

口诀:

小作文也要审题,先看文字后数据

时间单位和对象,尽量保证要准确

时态主要是过去,偶尔现在或将来

区分百分或数量,百千万都不加S

对象要注意词性,一般多会用名词

百分的分母分子,搞清方向和性质

以上就是Tina老师为大家精心整理的雅思写作干货。无论是大作文还是小作文的审题都会有许多陷阱,大家一定要提高警惕,谨慎避坑。正确审题时通往写作高分的第一步,各位考生要稳稳迈出这关键的一步哦!趴趴祝大家顺利备考,早日取得心仪的分数,成功与雅思分手~

如果你在雅思学习的过程中还是存在一些问题,比如在口语/写作/词汇量/阅读等方面比较薄弱,可以限时免费参加下面这个训练营,有雅思前考官主讲的口写训练营、也有口语/写作/词汇/阅读的专项训练营,5种训练营轮换开营,都是丰富教学经验的老师亲自带队,帮你用5天的时间,快速掌握方法,让备考效率有一个质的提升。



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