这两句从语法上来看都是对的，但是述位一般是在主题后面表现。所以第一句话更符合英文写作规则。更多英文写作技巧：www.emwchinese.com

我们在前面看了在句子中如何让自己的想要表达的观点更流畅，现在我们看看如何在段落中如何让自己的观点和论证更流畅。

2.1. 前一句的述位成为下一句的主题

The early feminist movement was greatly influenced by the work on MaryWollstonecraft. She proposed a feminist agenda whose aims were to expose the exclusion of women from traditionally male spheres such as politics, economics, education and religion. These aims became the main focus for religious women in particular in the United States.

主题是 Theearly feminist movement, 述位是Mary Wollstonecraft；然后下一段的主题就是 She，述位是aims；第三句的主题是aims。

2.2. 前一句的主位和后一句的是一样的

Karl Marx was a German philosopher. He was also an economist, historian, political theorist, sociologist, journalist and revolutionary socialist. He was born in Trier to a middle-class family and studied law and Hegelian philosophy. Due to his political publications, Marx became stateless and lived in exile in London, where he continued to develop his thought in collaboration with German thinker Friedrich Engels.

这段话每句话的主题都是Karl Marx, 后面的He都是指代他。

2.3.混合型方式

Darwin’s The origin of species published in 1859 was hugely influential in the field of science and in society in general. Indeed it has often been referred to as the ‘book that shook the world’. The book outlined how there could be a relatively gradual change in the characteristics of successive generations of a species and that higher plants and animals evolved slowly over time from lower beings. This evolution occurred as a result of competition within local interacting communities. Darwin’sbook helped throw the idea that there was a complete difference between humans and the animal world into turmoil as he reinforced the suggestion that humans evolved from lower beings. Prior to this it was believed in the western world, based on biblical works, that humans were created superior to other beings.

这个分析就留给各位去思考吧….

我们今天看了我们除了使用信号词（ si gnal words ） 外，还可以提高句子和段落间的的逻辑顺序来更流畅的 表达我们的信息。 在句子和段落中 清晰流畅表达我们的观点 可以 更容易让读者 读起来更容易 (reader friendl y)。 我们这期就到这里了，我们下一期讨论一下在段落写作中的连贯性（Cohesion ）。返回搜狐，查看更多