修改英文: 慰问信Source: Zhihu(prepared by: alexcwlin; edited by: Adam Lam)

Notes of Sympathy on Illness 慰问信

慰问信写作

高考英语作文范文：慰问信——疫情滞留表示关心。

假定你是高三学生李华，你的同学王平春节去武汉探亲因新冠状病毒肺炎疫情迅速扩散，他有发热症状而暂时滞留武汉，请你代表全班同学给此时处于焦虑和郁闷中的他写一封英文慰问信。

要点如下：1. 对其表示关心和同情。2. 对其表示安慰并提供帮助。3. 表达愿望和祝福。

注意：1. 词数150左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

alexcwlin comments:

Notes of Sympathy on Illnessa. edited by: alexcwlin; reviewed by: Adam Lamb. original prepared by: Bambi Lu

a. Hi, Little Wang:b. Dear Wang Ping: (Note: Addressing a close friend can be less formal without using “Dear”)

a. I’ve learned that you have to stay behind in Wuhan due to a mild fever. It’s indeed worrisome. On behalf of our classmates and myself, I would like to express our concern for you.b. Having learnt that you have to stay in Wuhan, I am really worried about you. So are our classmates. I am writing to convey our concern to you on behalf of our class.

a. We all know Wuhan has a huge health problem because of the COCID-19 pandemic. However, all the doom and gloom will eventually be over and happy days will be back. So, I urge you to stay positive, and I’m sure your fever is nothing to worry about.b. According to media reports, Wuhan was in bad situation due to the spread of SARS-CoV-2. However, dear friend, the gloomy day will finally pass, and the bright future will come soon. Having a little fever doesn’t mean pneumonia. You are supposed to stay optimistic, which is beneficial to get over the disease. (Note: Should it be COVID or SARS?)

a. A piece of good news is the College Entrance Examination has been put off. However, as scheduled, our online classes will start on April 8. All our classmates should have access to the internet and it’s indeed convenient for us to learn, isn’t it?b. In the meanwhile, it’s good for you to know that the College Entrance Examination has been put off. However, time is so precious that we can't afford to waste it. As scheduled, our online class will be held on April 8. All of the classmates have access to the Internet courses wherever you are. It is convenient for us to study, isn't it?

a. If there’s anything I can do for you, please feel free to ask. I sincerely hope you can make a speedy recovery and things will return to normal soon.b. Is there anything I can do for you? Feel free to contact me. I sincerely expect that you can make a quick recovery and return to normal.

Yours,

Li Hua

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alexcwlin comments:Bambi, your letter is well written. Good job! Try to streamline it a bit and cut out some of the unnecessary words. Keep up the good work.