11 应用文之请假条、留言条

研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板备战2023年中考英语高分作文（通用版）

第一部分 应用文之请假条、留言条体裁解读及写法点拨

体裁解读

①便条是非正式的书信或通知，主要用于尽快把最新的信息、通知、要求或活动的时间、地点转告给对方。

②请假条是最常用的一种便条，此外留言条也比较常用。

③便条一般内容简短，格式简单，语言通俗。通常包括日期、称呼、正文和署名。

写法点拨

英文的便条撰写，有一定的格式要求，主要包括以下四部分：

1.日期。写在右上角，只要写出月、日或星期几，有时只需写明上、下午的具体时间。

2.称呼。写在第二行，要左起顶格写。语气可随便一些。如Dear Jim,Jim等。

3.正文。应再起一行，用词要通俗简明，可以分为以下两部分进行撰写：（1)说明原因；（2)提出要求。

4.署名。署名要写在正文的右下角。一般的留言条只写留条人的姓名，姓或名均可。请假条、借条的署名要正式些，在姓名前写上Yours,Your student,Your friend等。

第二部分  应用文之请假条万能黄金模板

一、请假条万能黄金模板

Date

Dear            

①I am sorry that I shall be unable to                     （做某事），because                 （原因）.②So I beg to apply for                 （时间）days'/weeks' leave from            to        （从哪天到哪天）。／I would like to ask for           （几天）days' leave. ③I hope you can approve./I shall be very

grateful if you can grant my leave. Thanks.

Yours faithfully,

（署名）

注:

①点明使条性质及原因

②扩展说明具体请假时间

③表达请求

模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。

二、留言条万能黄金模板

Date

Dear                ，

①You were out when I visited just now. So I had to leave you a message.

②            （人物）visited/called you at about 10:00 in the morning,saying that           （事件）。③Please call her/him when you come back.

               （落款）

注

①留言原因

②留言内容

③表达期望

模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。

第三部分  必备词汇与套用句型

必备亮点词汇

invite v.邀请

approve v.同意

remember v.记住

forget v.忘记

make sure 确定

ring...up给······打电话

grant v.准予，准许

had better...最好····.·

fall ill 病了

stay in bed 卧床

have a fever 发烧

be in hospital 住院

look after 照顾

feel terrible 感觉很糟糕

be sorry for...抱歉······

good luck 好运

meet sb.与某人见面

ask for leave 请假

leave for a few days 离开几天

have a good time 玩得开心

经典套用句型

闪亮篇首句

I am sorry that I shall be unable to come to school,because...很抱歉我不能去学校了，因为······

I'm afraid I can't come to school today.今天我恐怕不能去上学了。

You were out when I visited just now.我刚才去找你时你不在。

I am writing to leave a message for you.我在给你留言。

Your grandmother is sick in the hospital now.你的奶奶生病住院了。

I have got the tickets for the films.我已经拿到了电影票。

His plane will arrive in Guangzhou in the afternoon.他的飞机将在下午抵达广州。

I am glad to tell you that...我非常高兴地告诉你······

出彩篇中句

I would like to ask for...days' leave.我想请······天的假。

I have a high fever and the doctor asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest.我发高烧了，医生要求我躺在床上好好休息。

I beg to apply for...days'/weeks 'leave from...to...我申请从······到······请······天／周假。

Please give me a leave of three days.请准予我三天的假期。

You'd better...你最好······

Do not forget to...別忘了······

I hurt my left arm in the basketball match yesterday afternoon.我在昨天下午的篮球比赛中弄伤了我的左手臂。

Would you pick him up this morning?你可以在早上接送一下他吗？

The doctor told me to have a rest at home for 2 days.医生叫我在家休息两天。

Can you come and meet me at 5 o'clock?你可以在5点过来与我会面吗？

I have to look after your grandfather this afternoon.我今天下午得照顾你的爷爷。

Could you tell her that the discussion at the bookstore is canceled?你可以告诉她在书店的讨论会被取消了吗？

精彩篇尾句

I shall be very grateful if you can grant my leave.如果您能准假，我将不胜感激。

I hope you can approve.希望您能批准。

I have to ask for two days'leave.我必须请两天假。

You should take care of yourself when I am out.我出去的时候，你要照顾自己。

Please be there on time.请准时到达那里。

Would you mind lending me the car of yours?你介意借我用一下你的车吗？

I am looking forward to your coming back.我期待你的归来。

第四部分 模板范文演练

一、请假条

假设你是李华，请写一张请假条向你的班主任王老师请假，希望他能准假。

事由：奶奶突然生病，需要人在身边照顾，而父母出差在外。

天数：两天

日期：五月八日

其他：表示将尽快返校，补上所缺课程

词数：80词左右

万能模板套用分析

首先，引出话题，点明写作目的。→主题

其次，具体阐述原因，提出请假。→原因

最后，表达意愿。→意愿

满分范文

May 8th

Dear Mr.Wang,

I am sorry that I shall be unable to come to school,because my grandmother fell ill suddenly.(句式多变原则，that引导宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句。）① She has a fever and is in hospital now. Both my parents are out on business. So l have to look after(短语优先原则。）my grandmother in the hospital.I would like to ask for two days' leave from May 8 to May 9.②I shall be very grateful if you can grant my leave. I will try my best to make up(短语优先原则。）the lessons that I missed.③

Thank you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

你也可以这样表达

①I am sorry that I cannot come to school due to my grandmother's sudden illness.

②May I ask for two days leave from May 8 to May 9?

③I promise that I will do my best to make up the lessons that I missed.

范文译文

5月8日

亲爱的王老师：

很抱歉我不能去学校了，因为我奶奶突然生病了。她发烧了，现在在医院里。我的父母都出差在外，所以我必须在医院里照顾我奶奶。我想从5月8号到5月9号请假两天。如果您能准假，我将不胜感激。我会尽力补上我所缺的课程。谢谢。

您真诚的，

李华

二、留言条

（广东）广东正在创建教育强省，学校需要改善办学条件。你所在的学校正在就如何改善学校现有的设施设备条件征求学生的意见。请你在学校的官方微博上留言，内容包括：

1.你喜欢学校哪个场所的设施设备以及喜欢的原因；

2.选取学校现有的两个场所谈谈设施设备的不足：

（1)这两个场所里还缺少哪些设施设备或物品；

（2)这些设施设备或物品的缺乏所带来的负面影响；

（3)如何改善。

要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

In my opinion,some facilities(设施）and equipment(设备）in our school are quite good.                          

Li Ming

万能模板套用分析

首先，陈述喜欢的设施。→优点

其次，陈述不足之处。→不足

最后，给出建议。→建议

满分范文

In my opinion, some facilities and equipment in our school are quite good. For example, there is a smart whiteboard in each classroom now. I like it because it makes our classes more lively and interesting.(句式多变原则，because引导原因状语从句。）①

However,we only have two electric fans in the dining hall,so we feel uncomfortable to have meals there in summer.②I think more electric fans should be fixed.(长短句结合原则，前面的句子为so连接的并列句，此句为简单的复合句。）Besides(一二三原则，使用了过渡词。），there are not enough toilets for girls in the teaching building. As a result, many girls are often late for class after waiting a long time in the toilets during the breaks.Why not build more toilets for girl students?③

Li Ming

你也可以这样表达

①The reason why I like it is that it makes our classes more lively and interesting.

②But we only have two electric fans in the dining hall,which makes us feel uncomfortable when having meals

there in summer.

③We should build more toilets for girl students, shouldn't we?

范文译文

我认为，我们学校的一些设施和设备非常好。例如，现在每个教室里都有一块智能白板。我喜欢它因为它使我们的课更生动有趣。

然而，我们在餐厅里只有两个电风扇，因此我们夏天在那里吃饭时会感觉不舒服。我认为应该安装更多的电风扇。另外，教学楼里女厕所不够多。因此，很多女生经常因为课间在厕所里等很长时间而上课迟到。为什么不为女学生建更多的女厕所呢？

李明

范文引路

假如你叫王亮，你父亲的朋友Brown夫妇对古典音乐很感兴趣。你送给他们两张第二天晚上在剧院举行的音乐会的票，那是一场由著名指挥家指挥的音乐会，很值得观看。恰巧Brown夫妇外出。请你写个便条，并顺便告诉他们，你已经读过他们送给你的两本书，很有趣。目前你正忙于考试，不能一起去欣赏音乐会了。

注意：便条词数不得少于80;应包括以上要点，但不要逐字翻译。

思路导航

第1步：例文审题

主体人称  题目要求写一张便条给Brown夫妇，故主体人称应为第二人称“you”。

主体时态  由于留言的是送音乐会票给Brown夫妇这一一般情况，故主体时态用一般现在时。注意其他时态的正确运用。

写作贴士 题目给出了绝大部分的要点，但写作时不能逐字翻译；注意词数要求，不得少于80.

第2步：列提纲

（1)说明来意；

（2)介绍音乐会情况；

（3)表达对所送书籍的评价以及不能同去的原因。

第3步：参考词句

（1) classical music; concert; ticket; conductor...

（2)book; interesting;busy; prepare for the exams; go to the concert; enjoy oneself...

第4步：连句成篇

Mr.and Mrs.Brown,

I've come to give you two tickets for tomorrow evening's classical music concert in the theater. I learn that you are interested in classical music, but it's a pity that you happened to be out. I have to leave the tickets with this note.The concert will be directed by a famous conductor and it will be wonderful.

By the way,I've read the two books you gave me. They are very interesting.This week, we are busy preparing for the exams.So I can't go to the concert together with you.I hope you will enjoy yourselves.

Yours,

Wang Liang

参考译文

布朗先生和布朗太太：

我过来是给你们送两张明天晚上剧院的古典音乐会的门票。我知道你们对古典音乐感兴趣，但是很遗憾你们出去了。我只能留下门票和这张便条。这场音乐会将由著名的指挥家指挥演出，会很精彩的。

顺便提一下，我已经读过你们给我的两本书。它们非常有趣。这一周我们忙于准备考试。所以我不能和你们一起去音乐会。我希望你们可以玩得开心。

你的，

王亮

第五部分 中考真题黄金模板运用满分作文

A

（2019·黑龙江·中考真题）

假如你是Henry，昨天下午在学校打篮球时伤了左脚，医生让你卧床休息两天，因此向老师（Mr.Read）请假。

Dear Mr. Read,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Henry

【参考范文】                                                                           

 Sep.15th

Dear Mr. Read,

I am sorry that I shall be unable to go to school today，because I hurt my left leg when I played/was playing basketball at school yesterday afternoon.The doctor told me to stay in bed for two days.So I beg to apply for                  two days' leave from now to tomorrow.I would like to ask for two days' leave. I hope you can approve.

Thanks.

Yours faithfully,

Henry

【详解】这篇作文要求我们给老师写一张请假条。请假条属于应用文的一种，在日常生活中比较常见，比较贴近学生们的实际生活。写作时，应向老师说明请假的具体原因，因为是写给老师的，且是向老师表示请求，故应注意语气要委婉。审题可知，这篇短文中应使用一般过去时和一般现在时两种时态，注意谓语动词的适当形式，分清动词原形和动词的过去式，尤其不规则动词的过去式形式。语句要通顺，句式结构应完整，符合英语的表达习惯。可以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。可以使用一些平时积累的好的短语和句型，提高作文档次。

B

（2022·辽宁·铁岭模拟预测）

假如你叫金峰，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医生建议你在家休息两天，你要向班主任赵老师请假，并请老师不必为你担心。请根据以上信息写一则请假条（30-50词）。

Asking for leave

Dear Miss Zhao,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                          Your student,

 Jin Feng

【参考范文】

Asking for leave

Sep. 11th

Dear Miss Zhao,

I am sorry that I shall be unable to go to school today，because I hurt my left arm in the basketball match yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days,So I beg to apply for                 two days' leave . Don’t worry about me. I will get well and return to school soon.I shall be very grateful if you can grant my leave.

Thanks.

 Your student,

 Jin Feng

【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时按请假条格式书写。写作时应先介绍受伤的原因，然后介绍医生的建议，最后请老师准假，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主；介绍受伤的原因以及医生的建议时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

C

（2022·黑龙江佳木斯·一模）

假如你是张华。奶奶病了，父母出门在外，你得在家照顾奶奶。为此向Mr. Li请假一天。

Asking for Leave

Dear Mr. Li,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Zhang Hua

【参考范文】

Asking for Leave

Sep.8th

Dear Mr. Li,

I am sorry that I shall be unable to go to school today，because my grandma is ill in bed and my parents aren’t at home, so I will have to look after her at home. I want to ask for 2 day’s leave.

I shall be very grateful if you can grant my leave.

Thanks.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一个请假条。因为奶奶生病而无法上学，因此请假一天。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。按照请教条的格式来写，要解释清楚请假的原因。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

D

（2020·江苏泰州·中考真题）

假定你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Mike留言：

1.回忆你俩之间一段难忘的经历（如互相帮助、互相鼓励或一起参加某项活动等），并谈谈你的感受；

2.你对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；

3.你对Mike的祝福和期待。

要求：

1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；

3.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li hua

【参考范文】

June.26th

Dear Mike,

How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye.

You were out when I visited just now. So I had to leave you a message.

We have studied in our school for three years. We had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, you have kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends. I’ve learned a lot from you.

    It’s important to keep healthy. I hope you can keep doing sports every day. You can take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. I think sports can make you energetic.

I wish you can become better and better in everything. I am looking forward to your success.

Yours sincerely,

Li hua

【详解】1.题干解读：这是一张留言条。三年的初中生活就要结束，要求给好友Mike留言，回忆难忘的经历并谈谈你的感受；提出对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；对Mike的祝福和期待。

2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、二人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述最值得回忆的故事时要用一般过去时，其它用一般现在时；内容包含四部分：第一部分开篇点题；第二部分讲述难忘的一件事情及自己的感想；第三部分对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；第四部分对Mike的祝福和期待。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。

3.高分亮点：

短语：say goodbye；do well in；do well in；Since then；as soon as；have a talk with sb；learn a lot from；keep healthy；take part in；in order to；look forward to。

句型：①让步状语从句 No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.

②时间状语从句 when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.

                 As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well.

③宾语从句 I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends.

E

（2019·辽宁铁岭·中考真题）

根据要求完成小作文，词数：30词左右。

假如你是李平，毕业在即，过去三年的美好时光历历在目。请你给最难忘的人杨阳写几句毕业留言。（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

Dear Yang Yang，

Li Ping

【参考范文】

June 27th

Dear Yang Yang，

You were out when I visited just now. So I had to leave you a message.

How time flies! I'll never forget you even when I leave our school. Thank you so much for helping me. You told me to practice more and never gave up. Wish you healthy and pretty!

Li Ping

【详解】本题是应用文写作，要求写一个毕业留言。动笔前考生需要看清题目要求，围绕关键词“最难忘的”组织语言。例文的层次清晰、内容饱满、表达流畅，符合留言的格式。短短几句话，运用了感叹句How time flies!，状语从句I'll never forget you even when I leave our school.和多种非谓语动词结构Thank you so much for helping me./You told me to practice more and never gave up.，亮点突出，是篇优秀的习作。

【点睛】留言属于应用文，一定要注意格式正确。语言需要简明扼要，切忌客套。完成后注意检查，看看有没有单词、标点和语法错误。