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专题16 读后续写02：个人成长类（解析版）成长类的故事，是高考读后续写常见的一个主题，比如2021年的高考“我”的工资。什么叫“成长”，主要指改变观念和改变态度两类。一、思维导图成长类故事构造“三部曲”第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）1、孤独I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. （2021年4月宁波二模）伤心我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately. （2021年4月宁波二模）看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。（2021年4月宁波二模）Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过（2021年4月宁波二模）Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me.3、惭愧1. She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2. Suddenly she came alive（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.（2021广二模）3. A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.（2020届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟英语试题）4、嘲笑他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”（2021年4月宁波二模）They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”5、绝望我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。（2021年4月宁波二模）“My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.6、紧张1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed (她的手指交叉着). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2. She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）3. Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）7、害怕I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) . （2021沈阳市一模）第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）1、惊讶Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）.（2021广二模）2、希望ked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）.（2021年汕头一模）3、教育与成长1. “That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears (一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.（2021年4月宁波二模）2. “What was done was done,” thought I to myself. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).” （2021年4月宁波二模）3. 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。（2021年4月宁波二模）Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys.第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）1、喜悦1. Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label on the box.（潍坊高三英语期中考试）2. Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）. （潍坊高三英语期中考试）3. Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头）. （潍坊高三英语期中考试）2、感激I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.（2021沈阳市一模）3、升华句1. 我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。（2021年4月宁波二模）I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。（2021年4月宁波二模）It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。（2021年4月宁波二模）Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream（实现我的梦想）.” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream(坚持我的梦想).”（2021广二模）4、It dawned on Aram that（Aram突然想到） “One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”（2021广二模））高考真题2021年6月浙江卷 “我”的工资My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass（超过） anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that l had to contribute my money.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: The pay day arrived at last.Paragraph 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.参考范文The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally got the payment after working hard for two weeks. While walking back home with an excited mind. I conceived many plans about how to dispose of it. I needed a new football because the old one we played had already worn out. I intended to purchase my favorite chocolates. Upon approaching the house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck, looking sadly. It seemed as if something unpleasant happened. “How much do we still need to pay for a new truck ". asked my mother. Three hundred dollars, but we just had two hundred left.”I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. Really, the truck my dad drove often broke down on the way, which made my dad in trouble. My parents had intended to buy a new truck but couldn't afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do. Stepping forward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received for my work. I think it would help you a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mom hugged me tightly. That night, before I went to bed, l thought I would tell the farmer the next day that I would continue my work, after all l grew up.模拟演练1．（2022·湖南·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。When a tornado hit a small town nearby, many families were left homeless. Afterward, all the local newspapers carried stories of the families who suffered the hardest to appeal to people’s attention and assistance.One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of a mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old. stood at her side, eyes downcast. Hiding behind her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, wide eyes with confusion and fear. The article below gave clothing sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my seven-year-old twins. Brad and Brett, and three-year-old Meghan to help those less fortunate than themselves.“We have so much. And these poor people now have nothing” I said. “We’ll share what we have with them,” I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them in the living room. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods. While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. The boys were pleased to join. Brad rose and went to his room fast. He came back bringing his action figures that he played with not so frequently. Brett also jumped up and ran to fetch some of his Matchbox cars and airplane models. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up abandoned toys.The boys placed the objects they had chosen to donate into one of the boxes while I filled the third box with clothes. Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, faded, best-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. “I’ll help you find something for the little girl, too.” I said to the little Meghan.Para. 1:“Mommy, I will give Lucy to them,” Meghan turned to me.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para. 2:Recognizing what little Meghan’s gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．One possible version:“Mommy, I will give Lucy to them,” Meghan turned to me. “Oh, honey,” I said. “You don't have to give Lucy. You love her so much.” Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with tears. “Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe she'll make that little girl happy, too.” She paused in front of the box that held the toys, pressed her round little face into Lucy's flat face, gave her a final kiss, and then laid her gently on top of the other toys. The boys watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.Recognizing what little Meghan's gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had bought on sale last week. I believed the young woman in the picture would like it and fit it as much as I did. The boys had also been inspired by our behavior and carried their beloved things. We all wished the family could pass the difficult period as soon as possible and that they would love the things we gave them with all our heart.【解析】【分析】本文以为受难者捐赠衣物和食物为线索展开，文章主要讲述龙卷风发生后，作者看到一张无家可归的一家人的照片，作者想让她的孩子们为受难者捐赠衣服、食物和玩具。女儿Meghan决定捐赠她最喜欢的娃娃，这个行动影响了作者，于是作者也将旧衣服换成新衣服捐给受难者。希望通过捐赠的物品使受难者感受到他们的一片心意。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“Meghan转向我，对我说：妈妈，我要把Lucy捐给他们。”可知，第一段可描写Meghan捐赠娃娃Lucy的过程。②由第二段首句内容“意识到小Meghan行为的意义，我把旧夹克衫从衣服箱子里拿了出来。”可知，第二段可描写作者行为的变化和感受。2.续写线索：Meghan捐Lucy——Meghan的想法——作者拿出旧夹克衫——捐新衣服——感受3.词汇激活行为类①看：watch/stare②放：place/pile up③捐：donate/give情绪类喜爱的：favorite/beloved/best-loved【点睛】[高分句型1] I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had bought on sale last week.（运用了that引导的定语从句）[高分句型2] The boys had also been inspired by our behavior and carried their beloved things.（运用了被动语态）2．（2022·江苏·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。For weeks, the troop had been busy preparing for its Parents’ Night program. Everything was in order. The walls were filled with displays, the scouts (童子军) were all enthusiastic. The tables were covered with good things to eat.Now it was time for Jimmie Davis to give his speech. This was the moment he had been looking forward to for several weeks. As he arose, he caught a glimpse of his mother’s bright face and his father's calm, confident expression. Jimmie held his head high as he started his speech, his words bursting with pride and enthusiasm. He made sure the speech was lively and moving, conscious that his listeners were showing high praise to him by their careful attention.Then something happened. The world seemed to move slowly from side to side before him. He felt his mind went blank and forgot what to say next. He slowed down, faltered (结巴), and finally stopped. His face turned red, and his hands sought each other wildly. In desperation, he looked toward his scout leader, begging for his help.Having heard that boyish but great speech practiced again and again, the boy’s scout leader supplied the missing words that allowed Jimmie to continue. But somehow it was different now. The wonderful speech had been messed up.Jimmie paused again, and once again the scout leader helped him. For the remaining two minutes, the speech seemed more like the scout leader’s than Jimmie’s.After what seemed like ages, the speech was finally over. In the heart of Jimmie, who sat down knowing that he had failed, there was a great weight pressing down on him. Disappointment was clearly written on the face of his mother. A twitch (抽搐) of the father's face showed how painful he felt.The audience applauded in a perfunctory (敷衍的) way, feeling sorry for the boy who they thought had failed.But the scout leader was on his feet. His eyes twinkled. All the audience listened carefully.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:The calm, sure voice of the scout leader echoed (回响) around the hall.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Jimmie began to speak in a trembling but firm voice.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．The calm, sure voice of the scout leader echoed (回响) around the hall. “You have seen a boy make a glorious victory out of what might have been a miserable failure. Jimmie had his chance to quit. To have quit would have been easy, but he didn’t. He did deserve our true respect.” Hearing the inspiring words and looking into his leader’s encouraging eyes, Jimmie felt that he had to do something. Gathering up all his courage, he finally felt himself, arose again and walked onto the stage slowly and firmly.Jimmie began to speak in a trembling but firm voice. “To be honest, I couldn’t have made it without my leader. I thought about giving up, but it was his encouragement that reminded me of the spirit of our troop, that is, to play the game even under difficulties!” Jimmie looked toward his leader with his eyes glittering with tears. The leader went up to him and threw his arms around him. At this moment, his parents overwhelmingly proud of their son, the entire hall thundered their applause at the little boy.【解析】【分析】本文本文是记叙文，讲述了吉米·戴维斯在Parents’ Night上搞砸了自己的演讲，让观众和他和父母感到十分失望，就在他万分懊悔的时候，童子军队长站出给他以认可与鼓励，让他重新找回自信的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“童子军队长平静而坚定的声音在大厅里回荡。”可知，第一段可描写童子军队长对在场的所有人说的话。②由第二段首句内容“吉米开始用颤抖但坚定的声音说。”可知，第二段可描写吉米受到队长鼓励后找回自信，勇敢地面对自己的失误，并当众发言。2.续写线索：队长鼓励——勇敢站出来——感谢队长——感悟——得到认可3.词汇激行为类①.放弃：quit /give up②.发光：glitter /shine/flash情绪类①.激励：inspiring /encouraging②.坚定：sure /firm/certain【点睛】[高分句型1]. You have seen a boy make a glorious victory out of what might have been a miserable failure. （what引导的宾语从句）[高分句型2]. Hearing the inspiring words and looking into his leader’s encouraging eyes, Jimmie felt that he had to do something.（现在分词短语作时间状语）[高分句型3]. To be honest, I couldn’t have made it without my leader.（虚拟语气）3．（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Henry got on his bike and began to deliver copies of the March 8,1970,issue of The Gazette. Half an hour later,he threw the last newspaper onto the porch（门廊）at 35 Oak Street and cycled to The Gazette offices. There must be something important for the editor in chief to meet with an 11-year-old paperboy."No good way to deliver bad news,"Mr. Trotta greeted him when Henry stepped in.Henry's smile faded."We're closing shop,Henry. Advertising is down.Television is how people get their news today. Local papers are the first to close."Mr.Trotta shrugged.Henry couldn’t believe his ears, frozen to the spot.He thought of all hose people he had met on his route. They wouldn't get their neighborhood news anymore!You were great,Henry—always dependable"Mr. Trotta said.Henry forced his head up to say good-bye.As he rode past the houses he knew so well he saw Mr.Grady on his porch,holding a broom（扫帚）. Henry led him to a chair and cleaned the porch.They sat for a while as Mr.Grady recalled how happy he'd been moving his family to 10 Oak. He sounded lonely.A week after his last deliveries, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did. He thought of a way to find out. He started out on his old route with a notebookHenry stopped at Mrs.Burke's. She opened the door, holding the two babies.She asked him if he knew any neighbors with experience of looking after children.Mr. Simon was next door, carrying his violin out."Hey, Henry. My band is having à concert in the park this Friday. Tell all your friends."As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head. Maybe he could create a newsy page（小报）for the neighbors.注意∶1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Neighbors cheered Henry's idea,ready to offer information.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Henry's first Oak Street News then produced desired effects.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．Neighbors cheered Henry's idea, ready to offer information. Besides Mrs. Burke who longed for a baby sitter and Mr. Simon who desired a large audience for his concert. Henry also collected six other neighbors' appealing and needs, including Mr. Grady who yearned for his children's coming back for a short reunion. Information in hand, Henry knocked at Mr. Trotta's door and pleaded for his support in publishing his first Oak Street News, who approved almost immediately. Soon, Henry's tabloid was in circulation, which he cheerfully delivered from door to door as before. Henry's first Oak Street News then produced desired effects. Neighbors applauded the idea of sharing their needs in a communal newspaper, which really addressed their immediate concern in a practical and efficient way. As Mrs. Burke successfully found an ideal baby sitter, Mr. Simon secured a large following for his concert and Mr. Grady who happily reunited with his kids, Henry realized, from his deep heart, that The Gazette was far from gone in this TV era, but transformed into Oak Street News that connected, bonded and tied the Oak neighbors in a cozy fabric.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了因为科技的发展，Henry送的报纸《公报》不再营业，想到了那些等待着报纸看新闻的人，Henry决定自己办一份小报给邻居的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“邻居们为亨利的想法欢呼起来，准备提供信息。”可知，第一段可描写邻居们都给小报提供信息，小报出版了。由第二段首句内容“亨利的第一个橡树街新闻随后产生了预期的效果。”可知，第二段可描写小报给邻居们带来了益处，将邻居们联系在一起。2.续写线索：邻居提供信息——出版报纸——报纸达到了预期后果——报纸给邻居们带来好处——邻居更团结3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）行为类①收集：collect/ gather/accumulate ②.支持：approve/accept ③.改变：transform/change情绪类①.舒适的：cozy/comfortable.高兴：happily/ gladly/merrily【点睛】[高分句型1]. Besides Mrs. Burke who longed for a baby sitter and Mr. Simon who desired a large audience for his concert.（使用了who引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]. Soon, Henry's tabloid was in circulation, which he cheerfully delivered from door to door as before.（使用了which引导的定语从句）[高分句型3]. . Neighbors applauded the idea of sharing their needs in a communal newspaper, which really addressed their immediate concern in a practical and efficient way.（使用了which引导非限制性定语从句）4．（2022·广东·汕头市聿怀中学模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4． The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Seeing Paul wave at him kindly and open the car door for him, Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed into the car without any hesitation. No sooner had the poor man got in than Paul closed the door instantly. The wolf walked around the car and howled furiously at them, but just in vain. Realizing it couldn’t catch Mac any more, the wolf ultimately gave up and walked away gloomily. On spotting the wolf swallowed by the road, Mac, bathed in perspiration, sighed with relief and sank down to the back seat. Paul handed a bottle of water to Mac, who managed a weak smile, murmuring something like “Thank you”.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Knowing that Mac had been chased by a wolf, they were stumped for words and paralyzed with fear. The two friends extended their earnest gratitude to Paul for rescuing Mac and then took Mac back home. After such a terrible experience, the splendid landscape of Alaska seemed no longer to be a temptation to them. On the way back home, feeling the light breeze through his hair, Mac felt what happened just now was just a nightmare, but a warm glow flooded into his inner heart as he thought of Paul’s unselfish assistance. The most precious part of humans is their care for each other.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小学教师麦克·霍兰和朋友们从家里骑车去阿拉斯加。途中他的一个朋友停下来修理自行车，麦克继续骑行，结果突遇一只狼，在最后，被正开车去阿拉斯加保罗和贝基救下的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“汽车突然停在他面前。”可知，第一段可描写保罗救了麦克。②由第二段首句内容“几分钟后，另外两个骑自行车的人来了。”可知，第二段可描写朋友感谢保罗。2.续写线索：骑行——遇狼——恰逢——援救——感谢3.词汇激活行为类①说不出话：stump for words/words fail sb/be speechless②回家：go back home/return home情绪类①感谢：thank sb for/show one’s appreciation/gratitude/be grateful②吓呆了：paralyze with fear/be overcome with fright【点睛】[高分句型1]：No sooner had the poor man got in than Paul closed the door instantly.这句话运用了no sooner…than的部分倒装结构。[高分句型2]：Realizing it couldn’t catch Mac any more, the wolf ultimately gave up and walked away gloomily.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。[高分句型3]：Paul handed a bottle of water to Mac, who managed a weak smile, murmuring something like “Thank you”.这句话运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。5．（2022·江苏·苏州市苏州高新区第一中学一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Snowflakes dancing in the sky, it was an awfully cold winter. Mary felt as gray as the sky outside. She struggled to get by the tough winter because her bills went up while her income went down.Her refrigerator sat empty. Her only food consisted of peanut butter, bread and bananas, only enough for two sandwiches. Worse still, it would be four days before she got paid. As Mary prepared to sit down and eat half of her remaining food, she heard a knock at the door. Who could it be on such a freezing night Robbery scenes from films flashed across her mind. Then Mary shook her head and laughed at her foolish thought-no robber would choose her as a target. Opening the door, she saw a stranger standing outside, body trembling with cold.“Madam, sorry to disturb you, but I'm lost and get stuck in the snow. Could you please spare a piece of bread " the stranger asked cautiously and politely in a weak but deep voice.“I'm afraid not,” said Mary, “but I could make you a peanut butter and banana sandwich.”“That sounds wonderful,” the stranger answered. "Mind if I wait here on the porch ”“Yes, I do mind,” Mary replied, "but you could come in and eat it at the table.”Not expecting both food and warmth, the stranger entered the house eagerly. Mary hurried off to the kitchen for the last four pieces of bread, peanut butter, and bananas. In a few minutes, she returned and invited him to sit down to eat what she could offer. After eating, the man thanked and said goodbye to her.Looking outside, Mary hesitated a moment and said, "If you don't mind, you can sleep on the sofa.” "That would be good enough," responded the man gratefully.Mary went into her room, and locked the door. The next morning, when she woke up, she remembered the man. "How will I tell him I have nothing for breakfast " she asked herself. She dressed, unlocked, and opened the door slightly.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。To her surprise, the man was nowhere to be seen._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mary opened the envelope and found a letter._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．To her surprise, the man was nowhere to be seen. Looking for him thoroughly once again, she confirmed that the stranger had left, without saying goodbye. Apparently, the “robber” had left without taking plaining of the man's impoliteness, Mary collapsed on the sofa where she put him up the night before, getting a little bit annoyed. With nothing left to eat, she sighed, "Anyway, good luck to him!" She got down to tidying up the sofa when an envelope lying on it came into her eyes.Mary opened the envelope and found a letter. It read, “It is harder to trust a stranger, especially when that stranger appears homeless. You have helped me restore faith in humanity so you deserve what you have received. "Mary had no idea what the stranger meant until she saw a cheque worth $ 10,000. Tears of delight welled up in her eyes. As it turned out, the stranger, who got stuck in the heavy snow and turned to her for help, was a successful businessman. Gazing at the warm light cast through the window, she decided to pay the kindness forward whatever the future would hold.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在一个寒冷的冬天，玛丽度日艰难，这天晚上来了个陌生人说他迷路了，想让玛丽给他一块面包，还收留他过夜。结果第二天早上玛丽发现那个人不见了，但却留下了一封信。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“令她吃惊的是，那个人不见了。”可知，第一段可描写发现陌生人不见后玛丽的反应，她抱怨那个男人的无礼时，倒在了前一天晚上让他住过的沙发上，有点生气。②由第二段首句内容“玛丽打开信封，看到一封信。”可知，第二段可描写信里的内容和信里的支票，以及玛丽的感悟。2.续写线索：陌生人不见了——玛丽觉得对方无礼——玛丽发现信封——读信——发现支票——玛丽感悟3.词汇激活行为类看见：come into one’s eyes / catch sight of提供：put up/ provide求助于：turn to sb. for help/ ask for help情绪类无礼：impoliteness /be impolite成功：successful /with success【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking for him thoroughly once again, she confirmed that the stranger had left, without saying goodbye. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] Complaining of the man's impoliteness, Mary collapsed on the sofa where she put him up the night before, getting a little bit annoyed. (运用了where引导定语从句)6．（2022·江苏·模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落首句进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I grew up in a small town where elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and in an age, not so long ago, when we children could go home for lunch and find our mothers waiting. At the time, I didn’t consider this to be so important, although today it certainly would be. Actually, our lunch time together in the past years had had a great influence on my life before I realized it.Our lunch time when I was in the third grade will stay with me always. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained patiently that she needed a narrator and had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles. Her words, kindly delivered, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard. It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine(藤) was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) appearing unexpectedly through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with small amounts of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one of the bushes. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling a blossom up by all its roots. “From now on, we’ll have roses in this garden.” I immediately protested, “But I like dandelions. All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:“Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty ” asked my mother thoughtfully._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” Mom said.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．Paragraph 1:“Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty ” asked my mother thoughtfully. I nodded without hesitation, as if a second wasted could deprive the dandelions of their life. “The same to you,” she added, her voice soft. “Not everyone can be a rose, and it is also an honour to be a dandelion.” Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily. She listened to me patiently and patted me on the back tenderly. Suddenly she stopped, as if to say something.Paragraph 2:“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” Mom said. She reminded me of how fluently I could deliver my part at home. It was at that time that I understood that maybe I was more suitable for a role back stage like a narrator. From then on, I practiced my lines heart and soul with my mother at lunch time for weeks. And the performance approached ultimately. Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding in me. What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions. The performance that night was eventually a big success. Hearing the thunderous applause, I took pride in my role and firmly believed that even a dandelion had its own beauty.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被选为学校话剧中的公主，但一上台，作者就忘词，老师就让作者做一名叙述者，回家后，作者妈妈看出作者的不安，妈妈提议把杂草挖掉，种蒲公英。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容““你是说每朵花都有它自己的美丽吗 ”母亲若有所思地问。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈举蒲公英的例子来安慰作者，作者敞开心扉告诉妈妈学校里发生的事。②由第二段首句内容““但你会成为一名出色的叙述者，”妈妈说。”可知，第二段可描写经过妈妈的鼓励，作者受到了蒲公英也有自己的美这一事实的激发，成功地作为一位叙述者完成了幕后解说任务。2.续写线索：陪走路——帮助——感谢——陪回家——拒绝——感悟3.词汇激活行为类意识到：realize/ recognize失去：deprive / lose鼓励：encourage / pull for情绪类成功：a big success / successful耐心：patiently / with patience【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily. (运用了现在分词作状语和第二个that引导定语从句)[高分句型2] What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions. (运用了what引导主语从句)7．（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学模拟预测）Tim recently graduated from the university and was looking for a job. After searching on the Internet he found out that a famous online business company is recruiting a new office manager. Many candidates applied for the entry exam, but only one would be accepted in the end. Tim noticed the resumes (简历) of other candidates and was surprised to see that some of them held a Master’s Degree or even a Doctor's Degree .But Tim was only a Bachelor, and barely met the lowest requirement of the diploma. Tim felt a bit frustrated because he had no advantage over other candidates who were excellent students. All the candidates entered the exam hall after handing up their resumes. Tim scanned through the pages of the test paper and found out that the questions were very difficult for him. Tim tried to calm down and focus on the questions themselves instead of their difficulty level. He started with the easiest ones and moved on to the more difficult ones slowly.There were two invigilators (监考人) in the hall , one of them was tall and thin , while the other invigilator was of the opposite: he was short and fat .They seemed to be quite confident about the honesty of the candidates and were absent. After about 10 minutes, one of the invigilators left to answer a phone call. The other invigilator soon went out too.The atmosphere in the exam hall changed after the invigilators had left .Some of the candidates took out notes and books, some of them brought tablets to search for answers, and some even called others for help .Tim looked back, and he saw the candidate sitting behind him cheating too. The man winked to Tim, as if telling him to cheat in the test because everyone was doing so Tim shook his head and continued doing the difficult problems at a slow pace.In about half an hour, the invigilators returned to the exam hall. Tim still had one question left blank at the end of the test. He was almost sure that he was not going to be accepted.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为120左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:The test result was to Tim’s surprise.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Tim then understood everything that had happened.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．Paragraph1:The test result was to Tim’s surprise. After one week, Tim received an email from the company saying that he was accepted as the new office manager. The next day, Tim went to the company and knocked on the door of the chief manager’s office. Before Tim said a word, the chief manager smiled at Tim and asked Tim whether he could remember that they had met before. Tim was very confused until the chief manager explained that he was the candidate sitting behind Tim in the test.Paragraph2:Tim then understood everything that had happened. The test was carefully arranged to test whether the candidates were honest even if no invigilator was there. The chief manager continued to say that their company was established based on honesty of the employees. The job of office manager would require the candidate to be independent and honest. In consideration of this, they found that Tim was the most suitable candidate to hold this position.【解析】【分析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。【详解】1.认真读懂所给提供的材料：蒂姆最近大学毕业，参加了一家著名的网上商务公司的招聘考试。蒂姆惊讶地发现其中有些人有硕士甚至博士学位，而他只有学士学位，勉强达到了文凭的最低要求。考试过程中监考老师并没有在考场能全程监考，于是很多人开始作弊。而蒂姆选择了诚实考试，考试结束时，蒂姆还有一个问题没回答。他几乎可以肯定他不会被录取。2.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。3.根据第一段首句The test result was to Tim’s surprise.(测试结果使蒂姆很吃惊)可推知，蒂姆被录用了，在本段中可以描述一下，为什么会出现这样的结果；根据第二段首句Tim then understood everything that had happened.(蒂姆明白了所发生的一切)可以针对为什么测试时，没有监考老师而展开构思。4.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如非谓语动词及宾语从句After one week, Tim received an email from the company saying that he was accepted as the new office manager.时间状语从句Before Tim said a word, the chief manager smiled at Tim and asked Tim whether he could remember that they had met before.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。8．（2022·重庆·礼嘉中学一模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was my first day of school. I loved school: the smell of chalk and colored crayons and having my own desk that was just my size. However, there was one big problem with school: Mildred.Daily when I walked the short distance home after school, Mildred would hit me and scare me. I was absolutely terrified of her. She had failed first grade and was a year older than me. Mildred didn’t have any friends, so she seemed to concentrate on making enemies. Because I was one of the smallest children in first grade, she had selected me as her number one enemy.As soon as the dismissal bell rang each day, my heart started to pound and I blinked fast so I wouldn’t cry.Pretty soon my mother figured out something was wrong at school. I didn’t want to tell her about Mildred. Mother continued to question me, and I finally sobbed out the whole story. I begged not to go to school and didn’t sleep much that night. The next morning she said, “Marion, I’m going to walk up the hill with you today. I believe we’ll see Mildred.” Mildred walked from way across down to school. She never bothered me on the way to school, only afterward.“Oh, mama, please don’t do that! Don’t say anything to Mildred. It will just make her mad. Let me stay home by myself. Please, mama.”“Hurry and get dressed, Marion.” Her voice was gentle, but quite firm.“Ple-e-ease, mama.”“Trust, Marion. I have a plan.”We bundled up against the bitter cold wind and stared out. Maybe we wouldn’t see Mildred, I hoped. But my mother had this confident look. I knew the look well, and I had a sinking feeling that we would see Mildred and that mother would use her “plan”.Just as we were turning around at a corner when we spotted Mildred. We waited a few moments as she approached us. “Hello, Mildred.” my mother said.1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:Mildred stopped, frozen as still as a statue.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Mildred chewed on her bottom lip and then nodded.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．Paragraph 1:Mildred stopped, frozen as still as a statue. Her hands and face were bright red and the oversized coat hung open with only two buttons. Mother stooped down, rapidly buttoning her coat. “I'm Marion's mother. I need your help, Mildred.” Mildred looked intently at my mother. “Marion doesn't have any sisters. She sort of needs a special friend at school. Would you be her friend ”Paragraph 2:Mildred chewed on her bottom lip and then nodded. “Oh, thank you! I just know you are someone I can depend on.” Then she hugged Mildred long and hard. I found Mildred smiling! I'd never seen her smile before. We walked up the hill each day after school together, and pretty soon we were talking, laughing and sharing secrets. I started calling her “Mil”, and then others did too, even Miss Edna. She always sat with me at lunch. My mother usually included something in my lunch especially for Mil-even notes of gratitude. Mildred smiled a lot now. She was getting good grades too, and didn't stuff her papers inside her desk anymore. I knew my mother’s plan had worked and I’ve learned that the plan works in all kinds of impossible situations: "Love is patient and love never fails.”【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的同学米尔德丽德是个问题小孩总是欺负作者，导致自己不爱上学，后来妈妈知道后，带着作者一起去找米尔德丽德实施计划，请她和作者做朋友，自此之后，米尔德丽德和作者相处愉快成绩也提高的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“米尔德丽德停了下来，像雕像一样一动不动。”可知，第一段可描写作者妈妈开始实施那个计划。②由第二段首句内容“米尔德丽德咬着下嘴唇，点了点头。”可知，第二段可描写之后两人相处愉快，妈妈计划成功。2.续写线索：害怕——请求——同意——相处愉快——计划成功——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①依靠：depend/ rely/account on②成功：work/be a success/succeed情绪类①感谢：appreciation/gratitude/be grateful【点睛】[高分句型1] I just know you are someone I can depend on.这句话运用了省略关系代词的定语从句。[高分句型2] Mother stooped down, rapidly buttoning her coat.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。试卷第1页，共3页专题16 读后续写02：个人成长类（原卷版）成长类的故事，是高考读后续写常见的一个主题，比如2021年的高考“我”的工资。什么叫“成长”，主要指改变观念和改变态度两类。一、思维导图成长类故事构造“三部曲”第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）1、孤独I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. （2021年4月宁波二模）伤心我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately. （2021年4月宁波二模）看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。（2021年4月宁波二模）Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过（2021年4月宁波二模）Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me.3、惭愧1. She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2. Suddenly she came alive（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.（2021广二模）3. A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.（2020届山东省滨州市高三第二次模拟英语试题）4、嘲笑他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”（2021年4月宁波二模）They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”5、绝望我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。（2021年4月宁波二模）“My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.6、紧张1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed (她的手指交叉着). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）2. She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）3. Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teacher's office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）7、害怕I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) . （2021沈阳市一模）第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）1、惊讶Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）.（2021广二模）2、希望ked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）.（2021年汕头一模）3、教育与成长1. “That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears (一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.（2021年4月宁波二模）2. “What was done was done,” thought I to myself. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).” （2021年4月宁波二模）3. 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。（2021年4月宁波二模）Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys.第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）1、喜悦1. Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label on the box.（潍坊高三英语期中考试）2. Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）. （潍坊高三英语期中考试）3. Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头）. （潍坊高三英语期中考试）2、感激I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.（2021沈阳市一模）3、升华句1. 我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。（2021年4月宁波二模）I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。（2021年4月宁波二模）It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift --- patience.然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待，直到真相出现。（2021年4月宁波二模）Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream（实现我的梦想）.” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream(坚持我的梦想).”（2021广二模）4、It dawned on Aram that（Aram突然想到） “One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”（2021广二模））高考真题2021年6月浙江卷 “我”的工资My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass（超过） anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that l had to contribute my money.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: The pay day arrived at last.Paragraph 2: I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.模拟演练1．（2022·湖南·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。When a tornado hit a small town nearby, many families were left homeless. Afterward, all the local newspapers carried stories of the families who suffered the hardest to appeal to people’s attention and assistance.One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of a mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old. stood at her side, eyes downcast. Hiding behind her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, wide eyes with confusion and fear. The article below gave clothing sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my seven-year-old twins. Brad and Brett, and three-year-old Meghan to help those less fortunate than themselves.“We have so much. And these poor people now have nothing” I said. “We’ll share what we have with them,” I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them in the living room. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods. While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. The boys were pleased to join. Brad rose and went to his room fast. He came back bringing his action figures that he played with not so frequently. Brett also jumped up and ran to fetch some of his Matchbox cars and airplane models. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up abandoned toys.The boys placed the objects they had chosen to donate into one of the boxes while I filled the third box with clothes. Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, faded, best-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. “I’ll help you find something for the little girl, too.” I said to the little Meghan.Para. 1:“Mommy, I will give Lucy to them,” Meghan turned to me.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para. 2:Recognizing what little Meghan’s gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2022·江苏·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。For weeks, the troop had been busy preparing for its Parents’ Night program. Everything was in order. The walls were filled with displays, the scouts (童子军) were all enthusiastic. The tables were covered with good things to eat.Now it was time for Jimmie Davis to give his speech. This was the moment he had been looking forward to for several weeks. As he arose, he caught a glimpse of his mother’s bright face and his father's calm, confident expression. Jimmie held his head high as he started his speech, his words bursting with pride and enthusiasm. He made sure the speech was lively and moving, conscious that his listeners were showing high praise to him by their careful attention.Then something happened. The world seemed to move slowly from side to side before him. He felt his mind went blank and forgot what to say next. He slowed down, faltered (结巴), and finally stopped. His face turned red, and his hands sought each other wildly. In desperation, he looked toward his scout leader, begging for his help.Having heard that boyish but great speech practiced again and again, the boy’s scout leader supplied the missing words that allowed Jimmie to continue. But somehow it was different now. The wonderful speech had been messed up.Jimmie paused again, and once again the scout leader helped him. For the remaining two minutes, the speech seemed more like the scout leader’s than Jimmie’s.After what seemed like ages, the speech was finally over. In the heart of Jimmie, who sat down knowing that he had failed, there was a great weight pressing down on him. Disappointment was clearly written on the face of his mother. A twitch (抽搐) of the father's face showed how painful he felt.The audience applauded in a perfunctory (敷衍的) way, feeling sorry for the boy who they thought had failed.But the scout leader was on his feet. His eyes twinkled. All the audience listened carefully.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:The calm, sure voice of the scout leader echoed (回响) around the hall.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Jimmie began to speak in a trembling but firm voice.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Henry got on his bike and began to deliver copies of the March 8,1970,issue of The Gazette. Half an hour later,he threw the last newspaper onto the porch（门廊）at 35 Oak Street and cycled to The Gazette offices. There must be something important for the editor in chief to meet with an 11-year-old paperboy."No good way to deliver bad news,"Mr. Trotta greeted him when Henry stepped in.Henry's smile faded."We're closing shop,Henry. Advertising is down.Television is how people get their news today. Local papers are the first to close."Mr.Trotta shrugged.Henry couldn’t believe his ears, frozen to the spot.He thought of all hose people he had met on his route. They wouldn't get their neighborhood news anymore!You were great,Henry—always dependable"Mr. Trotta said.Henry forced his head up to say good-bye.As he rode past the houses he knew so well he saw Mr.Grady on his porch,holding a broom（扫帚）. Henry led him to a chair and cleaned the porch.They sat for a while as Mr.Grady recalled how happy he'd been moving his family to 10 Oak. He sounded lonely.A week after his last deliveries, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did. He thought of a way to find out. He started out on his old route with a notebookHenry stopped at Mrs.Burke's. She opened the door, holding the two babies.She asked him if he knew any neighbors with experience of looking after children.Mr. Simon was next door, carrying his violin out."Hey, Henry. My band is having à concert in the park this Friday. Tell all your friends."As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head. Maybe he could create a newsy page（小报）for the neighbors.注意∶1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Neighbors cheered Henry's idea,ready to offer information.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Henry's first Oak Street News then produced desired effects.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2022·广东·汕头市聿怀中学模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2022·江苏·苏州市苏州高新区第一中学一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Snowflakes dancing in the sky, it was an awfully cold winter. Mary felt as gray as the sky outside. She struggled to get by the tough winter because her bills went up while her income went down.Her refrigerator sat empty. Her only food consisted of peanut butter, bread and bananas, only enough for two sandwiches. Worse still, it would be four days before she got paid. As Mary prepared to sit down and eat half of her remaining food, she heard a knock at the door. Who could it be on such a freezing night Robbery scenes from films flashed across her mind. Then Mary shook her head and laughed at her foolish thought-no robber would choose her as a target. Opening the door, she saw a stranger standing outside, body trembling with cold.“Madam, sorry to disturb you, but I'm lost and get stuck in the snow. Could you please spare a piece of bread " the stranger asked cautiously and politely in a weak but deep voice.“I'm afraid not,” said Mary, “but I could make you a peanut butter and banana sandwich.”“That sounds wonderful,” the stranger answered. "Mind if I wait here on the porch ”“Yes, I do mind,” Mary replied, "but you could come in and eat it at the table.”Not expecting both food and warmth, the stranger entered the house eagerly. Mary hurried off to the kitchen for the last four pieces of bread, peanut butter, and bananas. In a few minutes, she returned and invited him to sit down to eat what she could offer. After eating, the man thanked and said goodbye to her.Looking outside, Mary hesitated a moment and said, "If you don't mind, you can sleep on the sofa.” "That would be good enough," responded the man gratefully.Mary went into her room, and locked the door. The next morning, when she woke up, she remembered the man. "How will I tell him I have nothing for breakfast " she asked herself. She dressed, unlocked, and opened the door slightly.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。To her surprise, the man was nowhere to be seen._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mary opened the envelope and found a letter._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2022·江苏·模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落首句进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I grew up in a small town where elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and in an age, not so long ago, when we children could go home for lunch and find our mothers waiting. At the time, I didn’t consider this to be so important, although today it certainly would be. Actually, our lunch time together in the past years had had a great influence on my life before I realized it.Our lunch time when I was in the third grade will stay with me always. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained patiently that she needed a narrator and had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles. Her words, kindly delivered, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard. It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine(藤) was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) appearing unexpectedly through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with small amounts of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one of the bushes. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling a blossom up by all its roots. “From now on, we’ll have roses in this garden.” I immediately protested, “But I like dandelions. All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:“Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty ” asked my mother thoughtfully._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” Mom said._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学模拟预测）Tim recently graduated from the university and was looking for a job. After searching on the Internet he found out that a famous online business company is recruiting a new office manager. Many candidates applied for the entry exam, but only one would be accepted in the end. Tim noticed the resumes (简历) of other candidates and was surprised to see that some of them held a Master’s Degree or even a Doctor's Degree .But Tim was only a Bachelor, and barely met the lowest requirement of the diploma. Tim felt a bit frustrated because he had no advantage over other candidates who were excellent students. All the candidates entered the exam hall after handing up their resumes. Tim scanned through the pages of the test paper and found out that the questions were very difficult for him. Tim tried to calm down and focus on the questions themselves instead of their difficulty level. He started with the easiest ones and moved on to the more difficult ones slowly.There were two invigilators (监考人) in the hall , one of them was tall and thin , while the other invigilator was of the opposite: he was short and fat .They seemed to be quite confident about the honesty of the candidates and were absent. After about 10 minutes, one of the invigilators left to answer a phone call. The other invigilator soon went out too.The atmosphere in the exam hall changed after the invigilators had left .Some of the candidates took out notes and books, some of them brought tablets to search for answers, and some even called others for help .Tim looked back, and he saw the candidate sitting behind him cheating too. The man winked to Tim, as if telling him to cheat in the test because everyone was doing so Tim shook his head and continued doing the difficult problems at a slow pace.In about half an hour, the invigilators returned to the exam hall. Tim still had one question left blank at the end of the test. He was almost sure that he was not going to be accepted.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为120左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:The test result was to Tim’s surprise.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Tim then understood everything that had happened.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2022·重庆·礼嘉中学一模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was my first day of school. I loved school: the smell of chalk and colored crayons and having my own desk that was just my size. However, there was one big problem with school: Mildred.Daily when I walked the short distance home after school, Mildred would hit me and scare me. I was absolutely terrified of her. She had failed first grade and was a year older than me. Mildred didn’t have any friends, so she seemed to concentrate on making enemies. Because I was one of the smallest children in first grade, she had selected me as her number one enemy.As soon as the dismissal bell rang each day, my heart started to pound and I blinked fast so I wouldn’t cry.Pretty soon my mother figured out something was wrong at school. I didn’t want to tell her about Mildred. Mother continued to question me, and I finally sobbed out the whole story. I begged not to go to school and didn’t sleep much that night. The next morning she said, “Marion, I’m going to walk up the hill with you today. I believe we’ll see Mildred.” Mildred walked from way across down to school. She never bothered me on the way to school, only afterward.“Oh, mama, please don’t do that! Don’t say anything to Mildred. It will just make her mad. Let me stay home by myself. Please, mama.”“Hurry and get dressed, Marion.” Her voice was gentle, but quite firm.“Ple-e-ease, mama.”“Trust, Marion. I have a plan.”We bundled up against the bitter cold wind and stared out. Maybe we wouldn’t see Mildred, I hoped. But my mother had this confident look. I knew the look well, and I had a sinking feeling that we would see Mildred and that mother would use her “plan”.Just as we were turning around at a corner when we spotted Mildred. We waited a few moments as she approached us. “Hello, Mildred.” my mother said.1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:Mildred stopped, frozen as still as a statue.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Mildred chewed on her bottom lip and then nodded.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________试卷第1页，共3页

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