第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；

第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。

感谢信的写作指导

1.有序组织要点

首先，应当友善地对对方的生活表示关心；其次，应明确陈述写信的目的,即致谢；然后，应肯定对方的帮助恰当好处；最后，应对对方给予的帮助再次表示感谢并表示良好的祝愿。

2.灵活把握时态

感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。通常，在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时，应用过去时态；在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可以使用现在完成时态；在涉及到现状时，应用一般现在时；在表达祝愿或希望时，使用一般将来时态。

3.运用规范的语言

感谢信有其自身的特色语言，在行文的每一个环节也有一些常用句型。另外表示从对方的帮助中获益时，可以从多种句型表达，要让句式灵活多样，这样更能增强表达效果。

4.表达感激之情

感谢信的主要目的在于向对方致谢，因此语言要诚挚，友善；在信的开头和结尾部分一般会使用Thank you very much for your kindness and deep concern或 Thanks again and wish you all the best之类的语言表达感激之情。

第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因：

常用句式

I am writing this letter to thank you for …

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for…

With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…

I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …

I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…

I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...

第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助：

常用句式

It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to..

Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit…

It was your kind help that … (强调句型)

If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虚拟语气)

=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…

第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望：

常用句式

Thanks again for your generous help.

I appreciate it more than I can say.

My true gratitude is beyond the word’s deion.

I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.

Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.

Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.

练习1

假如你是李华，在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动，其间，一直住在你的英国好友Peter家，现在已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：

1.表达感激之情；

2.回忆各种收获；

3.发出邀请。

注意：词数100左右。

【写作指导】

书面表达考查考生运用已有的知识和技能来进行思想交流，完成特定的交际任务的能力。本篇书面表达所设置的情景是感谢在英国参加中学生文化交流活动期间Peter 对你的帮助,为应用文中的感谢信，是书面表达中常见的考查类型。写作时宜用第一人称，时态以过去时和将来时为主。感谢信的语言要真诚，感谢的事由要具体。根据题干的要点提示本篇书面表达的正文部分可分三段来写：

第一段：开门见山，说明写信目的一-表达谢意。

第二段：简述收获，表达谢意。准确明了地写出对方对自己的帮助或付出并表示感谢。

第三段：发出邀请。合乎礼节，情真意切。重申对对方的感激之情并希望给予回报。

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.

Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family made me feel at home.

I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around in China. I am looking forward to your coming.

Li Hua

【写作素材】

1.我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意/因……表达我对你的感激。

I’m writing to express my thanks for.../convey my gratitude to you for...

2.在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...

3.如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。

I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by...

【作文亮点】

▶正文分三段来写，首段点明写作目的，此处用了感谢信的常用句式"I am writing to convey my gratitude for..."来开头，"without which..."这一非限制性定语从句的使用提升了文章的档次，彰显了作者深厚的写作功底。

▶第二段简述Peter对自己的帮助，其中高级短语(文中加粗部分)以及非谓语动词Guided by you作状语的运用，增强了表达效果。

▶正文尾段使用了感谢信的常用高级表达，其中动词repay的运用起到了画龙点睛的作用。

练习2

假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际，请你给任教期满已回国的外教Peter写一封感谢信。要点如下：

1.老师在学习和生活上对你的帮助；

2.表达感激之情及祝愿。

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【写作指导】

本题要求写一封感谢信,回忆过去外教Peter对自己的帮助时，可用一般过去时，表达感激之情及祝愿时应用一般现在时。这个命题涉及中华传统文化所推崇的感恩这一优秀品质，又涉及西方文化中的感恩节，内容贴近考生日常生活，易于考生动笔。

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

Thanksgiving is drawing near! I am writing to express my thanks to you.

Without your help, I would not have achieved much in learning English last year. Moreover, you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits. Thanks to your help, I became more confident and spent more time reading English books. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject. Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.

Wish you all the best.

Li Hua

【作文亮点】

短文主题明确,重点突出,关联词语运用得恰到好处。难能可贵的是,短文使用了较多的复杂结构和高级表达方式，使短文增彩不少。

亮点词汇：express one’s thanks to sb., achieve, in low spirits, spend time doing sth., pay off等；

高级句式：时间状语从句(while I was in low spirits)；宾语从句(what you have done for me)等。

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