3. I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.

我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。

4. I am extremly pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor（家庭教师/助教）in the newspaper.

我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。

5. I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school.

我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。

公众号：Waynesunbj

6. I am writing to tell you that I'm suitable for the job you are advertising.

我写信是想告诉你，我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。

7. I am writing to inquire about the possibility of the job.

我写信是询问（我得到）这份工作的可能性。

8. I am writing to join the program.

我写信是想加入这个项目。

9. I would like to apply for it during the summer vacation.

我想要暑假申请它。公众号：Waynesunbj

【篇中句】突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由。

公众号：Waynesunbj

1. I think I'm qualified for the position.

我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。

2. In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills.

首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。

3. What's more, I am well acquainted with the western culture.（be acquainted with 熟悉）

而且，我非常熟悉西方文化。

公众号：Waynesunbj

4. Last but not the least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life.

最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。

5. I think it's of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends.

我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。

6. I am sure I can do my best in the job.

我保证在工作中会尽最大努力。

7. That's why I am applying for the position.

那就是我申请这个职位的原因。

公众号：Waynesunbj

8. I hope I can join you.

我希望我能够加入你们。

【篇尾句】请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。公众号：Waynesunbj

1. I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.

如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。

2. I hope you can offer me the opportunity.

我希望你能提供给我这个机会。

3. I hope I can be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。

公众号：Waynesunbj

4. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189......

如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189......

5. I am looking forward to your early reply.

期待你的早日恢复。

公众号：Waynesunbj

6. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

期待早日收到你的来信。

二、写作范例分享

【一、资助贫困大学生申请信】

假设你是新华中学的高三生李华，最近听说美籍华人Johnson出资帮助贫困大学生。请你根据以下要点写一封资助申请信：

1. 个人情况介绍；2. 申请资助原因(家庭困难情况)；3. 资助款的使用及今后打算。公众号：Waynesunbj

注意：1. 词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

公众号：Waynesunbj

Dear Mr. Johnson,公众号：Waynesunbj

I'm glad to hear that you will help those who are lack of money in going to college. I'm writing to apply for it.公众号：Waynesunbj

I hope that you will consider my application.

Looking forward to your reply.公众号：Waynesunbj

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【优秀参考范文】

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I'm glad to hear that you will help those who are lack of money in going to college. I'm writing to apply for it.

My name is Li Hua, a Senior Three student of Xinhua Middle School. I have much financial difficulty in continuing my education to college.

In my family, my father is the only breadwinner while my mother was laid off two years ago. My grandmother has been suffering a lung disease for more than five years. My younger brother is now studying in a junior middle school. I take part-time jobs during vacations, but what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees. In order to continue my study, I have to apply for your help.

If my request is accepted, I will make good use of the money and put my heart into study and make myself a good man to society.

I hope that you will consider my application.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【二、申请校英语社团拟招募英语主持人】

假设你是新华中学高二学生李津，得知校英语社团拟招募英语主持人，你有意应聘。请根据以下内容要点，用英语给该组织负责人写一封申请信。内容包括：

1.介绍个人情况；

2. 陈述个人优势(英语水平，知识面等)；

3. 表达期望。

注意: 1. 词数不少于100词；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 书信格式已经给出，不计入总词数。

词汇：社团：Society 主持人：host

Dear Sir or Madam,

________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Jin

【优秀参考范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Jin, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing to ask for a valuable chance to be a host in your English Society. The following are my advantages.

To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English, which is helpful for me to work as an English host. Besides, I have read a lot of books, so I know a lot about western cultures. What’s more, I have served as a host in some other shows so I believe I could perform well. More importantly, I consider it a good chance to serve our Society and develop my ability.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a chance.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【三、申请参加新加坡夏令营】

假定你是李华，从互联网((theInternet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:

1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);

2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);

3. 希望获准

注意：

1. 数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.

【优秀参考范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.

I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Lookingforward to your reply!

Yours

LiHua

【四、申请暑期到红星希望小学为学生辅导英语】

假设你是红星中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用暑期到红星希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：

1.对此活的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等）

2.个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）

3.你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）

注意：

1. 词数不少于100；

2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇：红星希望小学Hongxing Hope School

【优秀参考范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Hongxing Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.

I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.

My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

LiHua

【五、申请故宫暑期义务英文讲解员】

假设你是红星中学学生李华，你得知故宫正在招聘暑期义务英文讲解员，请你给相关部分负责人写一封申请信，内容包括

1. 介绍你的基本信息；

2. 说明你的优势；

3. 表示你希望被录用。

【优秀参考范文】

Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of an English volunteer guide at the Forbidden City in the summer.

Let me tell you something about myself. My name is Li Hua. I am a senior 3 student at Hongxing High School. There are several advantages that I possess. To start with, I am fluent in English, which allows me to explainthe glorious historyof the Forbidden City to foreign visitors clearly. Besides, I am an enthusiastic learnerof the Chinese history and atop student in class, therefore I have a rich knowledge ofthe history of the Forbidden City, which makes me well-equipped for the job. Apart from these xuy

I would feel grateful if you could give thegolden opportunityto share Chinese culture and history with foreign visitors. Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to your reply.

附：具体写法指导

一、思路点拨

（1）开门见山，说明写信目的；

（2）详述有关背景资料：自我介绍、优势、兴趣爱好，添加适当细节拓展或例证；

（3）希望尽快得到答复，表示感谢。

二、语言表达

三、常见错误

（1）审题不清，少要点：比如“暑期义务英文讲解员” 四个信息一个不能少。

（2）开头绕圈子，没有直接进入主题。

（3）在列举自己优势的时候，有些牵强附会，不够符合对方的要求。比如基于对方的需求，至少英语强、交流表达、懂历史这三点是一定要强调的，而且还要加上适当的例证。

（4）过渡语和衔接语不够，导致连贯性不强。

（5）开头结尾的功能句交际性不强。

四、积累

1. 好词集锦considerable,confident,suitable,extremely,pleased,grateful,especialy,opportunity,position,apply for,be good at,allow,would like to, offer, take...into consideration.

2. 说明应聘原因常用语

A.I learned from sb/the newspaper that your company wanted to...

B.I was told that...

C.I have just read in the newspaper that your company needs a...

D.I am writing to inqure opportunities for ...

E.I am writing to you to inqure if there would be any position available for me to work as a...

F.I am writing to apply for the job .

G.I have learned from your advertisement that a ...is wanted in your company.

3. 介绍个人优势常用语

A.Now I would like to introduce myself to you.

B. My name is Tom aged 16/who is a 16-year-old boy.

C.I graduated from...in 2012.

D.I like/am fond of swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time.

E.I work hard and Ican get along /on well with others.

F.I am good at English and especially my spoken English is fairly good.

G.I master English and I talk to foreigners in English freely.

H.I am currently studying ...

I.I would be interested in ....

J.My main specialization is...

4.表示感谢及请求常用语

A. Thank you for your consideration of my application.

B. If you agree with me,I'll work hard and try to be a...

C. I am available for interview.

D. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

E. If you agree with me, please write to me or phone me.my telephone number is...

F. I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to ....

G. I would like to apply the position that your company offers to me.

H. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.

J. I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.

K. I would be very grateful if you could consider my application and could send me about...

l. Apart from doing sth, I may as well work as ...

一、思路点拨

（1）开门见山，说明写信目的；

（2）详述有关背景资料：自我介绍、优势、兴趣爱好，添加适当细节拓展或例证；

（3）希望尽快得到答复，表示感谢。

二、语言表达

三、常见错误

（1）审题不清，少要点：比如“暑期义务英文讲解员” 四个信息一个不能少。

（2）开头绕圈子，没有直接进入主题。

（3）在列举自己优势的时候，有些牵强附会，不够符合对方的要求。比如基于对方的需求，至少英语强、交流表达、懂历史这三点是一定要强调的，而且还要加上适当的例证。

（4）过渡语和衔接语不够，导致连贯性不强。

（5）开头结尾的功能句交际性不强。

四、积累

1. 好词集锦considerable,confident,suitable,extremely,pleased,grateful,especialy,opportunity,position,apply for,be good at,allow,would like to, offer, take...into consideration.

2. 说明应聘原因常用语

A.I learned from sb/the newspaper that your company wanted to...

B.I was told that...

C.I have just read in the newspaper that your company needs a...

D.I am writing to inqure opportunities for ...

E.I am writing to you to inqure if there would be any position available for me to work as a...

F.I am writing to apply for the job .

G.I have learned from your advertisement that a ...is wanted in your company.

3. 介绍个人优势常用语

A.Now I would like to introduce myself to you.

B. My name is Tom aged 16/who is a 16-year-old boy.

C.I graduated from...in 2012.

D.I like/am fond of swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time.

E.I work hard and Ican get along /on well with others.

F.I am good at English and especially my spoken English is fairly good.

G.I master English and I talk to foreigners in English freely.

H.I am currently studying ...

I.I would be interested in ....

J.My main specialization is...

4.表示感谢及请求常用语

A. Thank you for your consideration of my application.

B. If you agree with me,I'll work hard and try to be a...

C. I am available for interview.

D. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

E. If you agree with me, please write to me or phone me.my telephone number is...

F. I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to ....

G. I would like to apply the position that your company offers to me.

H. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.

J. I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.

K. I would be very grateful if you could consider my application and could send me about...

l. Apart from doing sth, I may as well work as ...

【六、申请“英语文化节”志愿者】

【优秀参考范文】

Dear Ms.Chen,

I’ m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3. I’m writing to you to inquire if there would be any position available for me to work as a volunteer to provide service for your considerableprogram. Targeted at improving my confidence and gradually adapting to the enormous society, I sincerely hope I can be given this precious opportunity. As for me, outgoingand helpful, I’m excellent in English and especially my spoken English is fairly good. Once I won first prize in the National oral English contest, therefore, it’s out of question to express myself in English freely. Furthermore, I have fruitfully published several articles in English newspapers, which lays a solid foundation forthe position I’m dreaming of.

If given the opportunity, I’ll be surely devoted to the job, making the school magazine more popular with the students. I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【点评】

该篇习作中，除注意到使用在文章中使用到申请信常用的句式如 “I’m writing to you to inquire if there would be any position available for me…”; “I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.外，在语言表达上也可圈可点。 如在词语上，使用了诸如“considerable；precious；outgoing；helpful”等形容词，还使用了“fairly；freely；fruitfully；surely；greatly”等副词起到加强语气，表达强烈期望的作用。而在短语和句式表达上，使用了诸如“Targeted at improving my confidence…；making the school magazine more…”等非谓语动词做状语；it句式，省略用法等，形式多样而又错落有致，值得借鉴。

最后，在写作申请信时，同学们应注意：一，语气要诚挚友好千万不要表现出强求的意思，诸如must; should 等一类词语尽量少出现；二，对于申请的内容和原因应尽量写清楚；三，期望得到的心情一定要表达出来，诸如”I would be grateful if you could…”一类的句式用在申请信上是再合适不过的。

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