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April 20, 2023

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【地图】

The maps below show the changes of the school library.

主体段分段方法：按照区域位置分段

Body 1：南北 变化前后的对比

Body 2：西边、东边 变化前后的对比

时态：第一张图的信息用【一边过去时态】，第二张图的信息用【现在完成时】描述变化

The maps demonstrate the original layout of alibraryfive years ago and how it looks like at present.

Overall, the maps indicate that the libraryhas witnessed noticeable changesduring the given period. Especially, there has been more space for self-study.

【概述段】：变化描述用现在完成时态

It is clear that five years ago, two groups of bookshelves were locatedon the northern and southern side,with5 desksin the central part ofthe library. Currently, although theformerbookshelves in the north haveremained unchanged, thoseon the southern parthave been replaced bya separate laptop room. Meanwhile, theinitialstudy areahas been expanded.

【解析】：

Body 1：描述南北变化前后的对比。

**多个相邻地点：使用with复合结构 打包描述

Looking at the western part, we can see that five years ago, there was a meeting room between a classroom and an area for borrowing-and-returning books. At present, although the meeting roomstill exists, the room on the south of it hasbeen transferred intoa single area for borrowing books, and a newly-built audio area hasreplacedtheoriginalclassroom. Also,we can see the addition ofa room for returning bookson the southwestern corner. Meanwhile, from the first map we can find thatalong the eastern sideof the library was a computer room,withthe Library Officelyingon the southeastern corner. However, these two sectionshave been demolished to make way fora study room for students with laptop and a conference room.

【解析】：

Body 2：描述西边、东边 变化前后的对比。

**多个相邻地点：使用with复合结构 打包描述

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