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续写1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Once there was a little girl named Emily. Although her singing was very pleasant to hear, lacking of courage, she never dared to sing in front of strangers.One summer, the neighborhood where she lived would hold a singing competition. Her best friend, Lucy, came to invite her to participate in the competition, but Emily said, “ I’m afraid to take part in it.” Her mother said, “ it’s okay, just do it bravely.” Emily followed her mama’s advice and decided to give herself a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy went to the competition site. But she was too timid (胆小的) to walked onto the stage. She had been waiting until others finished singing. She shakily forced herself to stand on the stage. She started to sing, but her voice was so low. What’s worse, she was so nervous that she forget the lyrics (歌词) after singing a few words. Being laughed at by others, embarrassed and shy, she ran away from the stage.Some naughty boys ran after her and said, “ Emily, coward (胆小鬼)! Emily, coward! ” Emily didn’t argue with them. What she wanted was to go back home as quickly as she could. Finally, she rushed into the house, hugged her mom and cried sadly.“Well, my poor girl. Don’t cry. Tell me what happened to you.” asked her mom. Emily looked up at her mother and told her what she had experienced.Listening to her, her mom cupped her face and said, “it doesn’t matter, girl. As long as you practice singing more in front of strangers, you will become braver little by little. So, my girl, don’t be beaten by a failure. You can go out to practice singing every day. No matter who is listening to you, go on singing and never stop. I believe there will be a harvest for you. ”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Going on singing, she walked into the park, where many people were singing and dancing._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．Paragraph 1:Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her mom’s suggestion. The next day, she began to practice singing outside. Gradually, her courage became greater and greater, and the sound of her singing was also louder and louder. Months later. She could sing as she was walking. A naughty boy who had laughed at her before cried to her, “Emily, coward! Emily, coward!” However, she chose to ignore his behavior.Paragraph 2:Going on singing, she walked into the park, where many people were singing and dancing. Hearing her beautiful voice, some stopped to listen to her singing and clapped for her. Emily felt pleased that she could sing confidently in front of strangers. The second year, the neighborhood held the singing competition again. This time, Emily walked onto the stage bravely, and her loud and beautiful voice of singing moved all the people. They all cheered for her, including those who had laughed at her. Her mother was delighted to see the timid girl had been a brave one.【分析】本篇书面表达属于读后续写。要求考生阅读所给情节后续写两段内容，每段第一句都已给出。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，Emily唱歌很好听，但是她没有勇气在人前唱歌。一年夏天，Emily在朋友Lucy的邀请和妈妈的鼓励下，参加了一个歌唱比赛。由于太紧张，歌唱声音很小，甚至忘记了歌词。淘气的男孩们嘲笑她是胆小鬼。Emily哭着跑回了家。妈妈知道后，鼓励她要克服不敢在人前歌唱的问题，并相信她一定会有收获。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Emily认真地听妈妈讲话，并听从了妈妈的建议。那么接下来应该接着写：第二天Emily就开始在外面练习唱歌。慢慢地，她开始变得勇敢，唱歌的声音也变大了。后来，当她练习的时候，碰见嘲笑她的男孩再次嘲笑她，她也不理睬。第二段开头是：她继续歌唱着，她走进了公园，这里有很多人在唱歌、跳舞。接下来应该接着写：公园的人都被Emily美妙的声音吸引了并为她鼓掌，这时Emily感觉到自己可以在陌生人面前勇敢地唱歌了。第二年，Emily再一次参加了那个歌唱比赛，所有人都为她的表演欢呼。Emily的妈妈很高兴看到女儿如今变得这么勇敢。续写2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为80词左右。Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks (盯着他们).One day, Ali took Zahra's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them on the way home. It wasn’t until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali’s running shoes. Zahra’s school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part. He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong start，but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her. Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided (碰撞) with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为80左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____Paragraph 2:Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 1:Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead. Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. He dashed across the finishing line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let her sister down. Ali couldn’t help sobbing. Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule. Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.Paragraph 2Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly. He could not wait to see his sister and share the good news. “Zahra, see what I have got for you.” Ali said excitedly, taking the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.本篇书面表达是读后续写。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了发生在两兄妹之间的故事。哥哥Ali和妹妹Zahra家境穷苦，数月未能交上房租。Ali在帮妹妹Zahra修鞋时将妹妹的鞋子弄丢了，两人只好分享同一双鞋上学，哥哥要在学校之间不断奔跑才能将鞋换给妹妹Zahra，但往往会由于Ali经常迟到，妹妹Zahra会受到学校的警告。一次跑步比赛的三等奖鞋子吸引了Ali，他决定参加比赛为妹妹Zahra赢得这双鞋。比赛中，尽管疲惫和腿疼，他坚持到终点，却被另一名跑步者撞倒在地。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead. (Ali抬起头，看到其他的男孩在前面冲。)所以应该写Ali没有放弃，继续跑到终点，但由于摔倒过，应是没能如愿得到第三名；但前文“Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.(当终点线临近时，另一名选手从后面与Ali阿里相撞，Ali摔倒在地。)”已经埋下伏笔“男孩犯规，失去资格”，而在本段描写Ali还是能获得三等奖，同时讲述他的欣喜感受；第二段开头是Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly. (Ali满心欢喜，快步走回家。) 本段应该写哥哥Ali回到家中，将鞋子送给妹妹，妹妹满心欢喜，两兄妹相拥。续写3阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A friend of mine whose name was John Smith had a bad memory, which made him famous. He was so forgetful that he sometimes forgot what he was talking about in the middle of a sentence. His wife had to constantly( 经常地）remind him about his meetings, his classes, even his meals! Once he forgot he had eaten breakfast twice, at home and at school. His wife liked to remind her neighbors, “If John didn’t have his head tied on, he would forget that too!” Since Smith was a professor at a well-known university, his forgetfulness was often an embarrassment to him. It wasn’t that he was not clever, as some critical people tended to say, but just very, very absent-minded.One hot summer day, Pro.Smith decided to take his children to a seaside town about a three-hour train ride away. To make the trip more interesting for his young children, he kept the name of the town a secret. However, by the time they arrived at the station, Smith forgot the name of the town he was planning to visit. luckily, a friend of his happened to be in the station. He offered to take care of the children while Smith hurried back home to find out where he was going.The professor’s wife was surprised to see him again so soon.“Oh, my dear, I forgot the name of the town.”“What You forgot the name Maybe one day you will forgot my name! Now I’ll write the name of that town on a piece of paper, and you put it in your pocket and please, please don’t forget where you put it.”Satisfied that she had solved the problem, she sent her husband off again. Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time.Paragraph 1:“What is the matter now ” asked his wife._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“What is the matter now ” asked his wife. “ I just can’t remember why I come back and where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day.” replied the professor. However , the real reason was that he forgot where he had left his children. Sensing something wrong, Mrs. Smith didn’t believe his words, because whenever he told a lie, he would blink his eyes usually quickly. “ Tell me the truth,” ordered his wife. “ As you told me, I didn’t forget where I put the name of that town, but I forget the station where I left our children!” Whispered the professor, his voice trembling. “ What a bad memory!” shouted the wife.“Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened. A fight between the couple was about to start when the professor’s cellphone began to ring. His friend phoned to complain. The professor apologized, got into his car and drove away, leaving behind a bunch of people outside the house. Being afraid that he would make matters worse again, Mrs. Smith decided to follow him, who then called a taxi. By the time she caught up with her husband, the children were already back home safe and sound.【分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了记忆力不好的Smith教授的故事。Smith教授由于记忆力不好，经常会忘记一些事情。有一次他带着儿子去海边玩，但是却忘了目的地的名字，于是他将儿子托付给朋友，自己赶紧回家查看要去的地方。妻子见到他非常吃惊，于是把目的地写在一张纸上，妻子意以为问题解决了，没想到又看到Smith回来，这次他忘记了自己把孩子留在哪个车站了。续写部分可续写因为Smith的健忘导致的一些事故。【详解】根据关键字判断情节发展。文章第一段提到“A friend of mine whose name was John Smith had a bad memory, which made him famous.”Smith教授以健忘出名，这句话为后文发生的事埋下了伏笔，说明Smith会因为健忘搞砸很多事。文章最后一段提到“Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time.”十分钟后，妻子第三次看到Smith，由此可判断Smith又忘记了事情。续写第二段开头提到“Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened.”邻居都听到两人的哭声，说明发生了更可怕的事才会让两人情绪失控，由此可判断在续写第一段中可描写Smith教授忘记孩子在哪里。孩子的事情会让父母失去控制。因此，续写第二段可描写二人找孩子的过程。最后，可安排一个反转的结局——二人正准备去找孩子的时候，孩子自己回来了。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：be supposed to（应该），find out （弄清楚），a bunch of（一些，一束），safe and sound（安然无恙）等高级词汇；that引导表语从句However , the real reason was that he forgot where he had left his children. ，现在分词作状语和全倒装 Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened.等高级句式。

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