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浙江省外研版初中英语八年级上册期末复习（题型专练）：书面表达一、书面表达1．（2019八上·新泰月考）很多家长为了让孩子赢在起跑线上，经常给他们报名参加各种课后补习班。假如某英文杂志社正在就是否应该让孩子参加课后补习班这样的话题征稿，请你根据提示写一篇短文，阐述一下你的观点，并向该报社投稿。提示：1）你是否同意；2）解释原因；3）你的观点。要求：1）词数：80—100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2）包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3）文中不要出现真实校名和人名。In some families,competition starts very young and continues until the kids get older.2．假如你是琳达，你的好朋友文琪给你写了一封信，告诉你她在英语学习中遇到了两个困难：1）在英语课上不明白老师讲什么;2）害怕犯错误，不敢与同学们用英语交流。请针对上述问题用英语给她写一封70词左右的回信，提出你的建议。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearWen Qi,I'mhappy to hear from you.Ihope you will do better in English.Yours,Linda3．话题：本模块以“老舍茶馆”为话题，主要介绍了老舍的话剧《茶馆》及老舍的生平和创作。介绍人物是书面表达的话题之一。老舍是中国著名的作家。请根据下表提示写一篇短文，介绍一下他的情况。真名 舒庆春1899 出生于北京1913 在北京师范学校学习1924 去伦敦；教汉语1931 结婚，有四个孩子1957 创作《茶馆》1966 去世评价 被称为“人民艺术家”；是二十世纪最伟大的中国作家之一。4．话题：本模块以“出行方式”为话题，主要介绍了一些外出的交通方式。假期就快到了, 同学们纷纷打算在假期出去旅游。就选择何种出行方式大家有不同的看法。请你根据表格中的提示，对此做简要介绍并表明你自己的观点。Wayof transportation Number ReasonPlane 10 Fast,excitingTrain 20 Safe,comfortableCoach 5 CheapYourchoice and reason ……要求：1）包含表格中所给信息，语句通顺、语法正确;2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。I did a survey about ways of transportationto choose during holidays among my classmates. Here are the results.5．话题：本模块的话题是“安全和急救"。学习并懂得安全知识，在自己和别人遇到突发事故时会有很大的帮助。假定你是王伟，你的英国笔友戴维来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。●家庭安全：小心用火用电，外出时关好门窗；●游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖里游泳；●交通安全：过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。注意：1）词数80左右；2）请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。6．假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动，你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难，请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。要求：1）80一120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考要点：1）活动情况简介(时间、内容……)；2）遇到的困难(如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……)；3）请求帮助的事项。Dear Nick,How's everything going Yours,Li Hua7．紧张而充实的一学年又要结束了,东台市首届阳光少年的评选活动正如火如荼地进行。假如你是David，请根据下表所提示的内容，写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Tom（七年级四班）获取今年的最佳学生奖。学 习 努力学习，所有学科都学得很好。能 力 篮球打得好，他想下学期进入校篮球队。爱 好 喜爱动物，他在家养兔子当宠物并把它照顾得很好。品 德 1）乐于助人，经常帮助同学复习功课。 2）热心、有礼貌，在公共汽车上 ……要求： 1）条理清楚，语意连贯。2）紧扣主题，适当发挥。3）书写规范，标点正确。正文80字左右。信的开头称呼和结尾落款已经写好，不计入字数。Dear Sir,I am writing to recommend Tom for thisyear's Best Student Award.I think Tom has all the qualities to get the award.YoursDavid8．现如今有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如熊猫、虎和大象等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以"Why Should We Protect Wild Animals " 为题，根据以下提示信息，用英语写一篇短文。词数80左右。提示：1）介绍一下你最喜欢的濒危动物；2）濒危原因；3）保护它们的建议。Why Should We Protect WildAnimals 9．话题：本模块以"居住环境"为话题,围绕这一话题描写自己的家乡或所居住的城市。描述一个地方, 可以描述该地的位置、人口、天气、名胜古迹、特色及其发展变化等。根据以下提示信息, 以"My home town一Nanning"为题写一篇不少于80词的短文。可适当发挥。1）南宁市比广西的其他任何城市都大, 位于广西的南部;2）广西的首府, 现有约740万人口;3）作为"绿城"(the Green City)而出名;4）南宁冬天不冷, 夏天它也不是我国最热的地方;5）南宁的人民很友好。Myhome town-Nanning10．请你根据以下提示，向外国友人简单介绍一下黄山(Mount Huang)。提示：1）位于安徽省南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去游览观光。2）乘公共汽车去大约要花3个小时；也可以乘火车去。3）登山可领略云海(the sea of clouds)、奇松(wondrous pines)、怪石(unique rocks)等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。注意：1）词数：80词左右。2） 不要逐字翻译。答案解析部分1．【答案】 In some families, competition starts veryyoung and continues until the kids get older. Parents send their children toall kinds of after-school classes. They think it's good for their children.They really want them to be successful.I don't agree with that. In my opinion,students should have free time to do whatever they want. Although it's normalto want successful children, it's even more important to have happy children.Parents are always comparing us with other children. It's crazy. I don't thinkit's fair. Why don't they let kids be kids Parents shouldn't push us so hard.Too much pressure is not good for our development. We should have time to relaxand think for ourselves.Weare sometimes busier on weekends than weekdays. I hope parents can cut out afew of our activities.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，按照要求就是否应该让孩子参加课后补习班这样的话题写征稿，写作中要包含：你是否同意；解释原因；你的观点。根据材料内容可知本文是一般现在时，人称是第一人称单数，写作时注意包含上述提示要点，并保持行文连贯，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。【点评】这篇短文按照材料所给的提示，针对主题进行了陈述，表达了自己的观点，内容全面，准确使用了一些固定搭配和连词，使文章连贯、通顺。如：这些send their children to all kinds of after-school classes，it's good for， want them to be successful，don't agree with， In my opinion，do whatever they want， Although it's normal to want successful children，comparing us with other children，Why don't they let，push us so hard，cut out，都是可圈可点之处，表达准确，使文章增色不少。2．【答案】Dear Wen Qi,I'mhappy to hear from you. I know you have two problems about English learning. Ihave some advice for you. Listening to English songs is a good way. You canalso watch English news on TV or read some English newspapers. Don't be shy orafraid of making mistakes when you speak English. You should often talk withyour classmates in English. I hope my advice can help you improve your English.Ihope you will do better in English.Yours,Linda【知识点】应用文写作【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用作文，主要介绍文琪告诉自己在学习中遇到的困难及建议，时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己了解了文琪的困难；然后介绍自己的建议；最后总结，希望文琪在英语方面做得更好。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。【点评】写作时注意作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：listen to；make mistakes；be afraid of doing sth.；talk with‘help sb. do sth.；do better in等。动名词做主语、祈使句和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：Listening to English songs is a good way. Don't be shy or afraid of making mistakes when you speak English.I hope my advice can help you improve your English.I hope you will do better in English.等。连词or，when的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。3．【答案】 Lao She is a famous Chinese writer and his real name is Shu Qingchun. He was born in 1899 in Beijing. He studied in a teacher's school in Beijing in 1913. In 1924 he went to London and taught Chinese there. He got married in 1931 and had four children. He wrote Teahouse in 1957. He passed away in 1966. He was named "the People's Artist" and he's one of the greatest Chinese writers of the twentieth century.【知识点】材料作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国著名的作家——老舍，时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。首先介绍老舍的出生及籍贯；然后介绍老舍1913年在北京师范学校学习、1924年去伦敦教汉语、1931年结婚、1957年创作《茶馆》、1966年去世，时态是一般过去时；最后总结及评价老舍。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。【点评】写作时注意作文内容全面，涵盖提示信息。运用好词好句，如：be born；get married；pass away；be named；one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数等。被动语态和最高级的运用为文章增色不少，如：He was named "the People's Artist" and he's one of the greatest Chinese writers of the twentieth century. 等。连词and等运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。4．【答案】 I did a survey about waysof transportation to choose during holidays among my classmates. Here are theresults.Most of the classmates in our class like totravel by train. They think it's the safest and most comfortable way. Ten ofthe students will choose to take a plane because they think it is fast andexciting. Only five of them will go by coach because it is cheap. My favouriteway of travelling is by train. I think it's safer and not expensive. Travellingby plane is fast but costs more money. Taking a coach is cheap but a littleslow.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】本文要求根据表格内容，介绍我班同学的出行方式。根据提示及要求，内容包括：10位同学喜欢乘飞机旅行，原因是乘飞机旅行快而且令人兴奋；20位同学喜欢乘火车旅行，原因是乘火车旅行安全而且舒服；5位同学喜欢乘公共汽车旅行，原因是乘公共汽车旅行快而且便宜；自己的旅行方式及原因。文体说明文；人称第一人称；时态一般现在时。适当运用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点评】这篇短文包含了题目所给的所有信息。连词and，but使用得当。还运用了原因状语从句及宾语从句。 Only five of them will go by coach because it is cheap. （原因状语从句） They think it's the safest and most comfortable way. （宾语从句）5．【答案】Dear David,Gladto receive your email. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow.Let me tell you something about them.Becareful with electricity when using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, forit may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure to close doors and windowsbefore leaving home. Besides, we mustn't swim alone, especially in deep riversor lakes. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyoneshould watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play onthe road.Ithink these rules are necessary as safety comes first.Havea good summer holiday!Yours,WangWei【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的提示要点给英国笔友戴维回一封电子邮件。写作中要包含所给的三个方面的内容，家庭安全，游泳安全和交通安全。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致的问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。【点评】这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。其中一些固定句式和短语，如be careful with; make sure; what's more; watch out等以及句型结构It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important.And our school warns us not to play on the road.等运用较为得体，表达较为准确，使文章更加流畅、自然。6．【答案】Dear Nick,How's everything going Our school is holding an English readingfestival this June. I'm very interested in it. There are many" differentactivities in the festival, such as reading good English books, sharing goodstories and so on. It's a good chance for us to learn more about Westernculture. However, I have some problems. First, I don't bare enough books. For example,t want to get some books about Western history. Next, I'm not so good atEnglish. I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books withme and give me some advice on reading I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求你给应该朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。本题给出了三方面内容要求：首先要写活动情况简介，其次写遭遇的困难，最后写请求帮助的事项。在写作时要注意时态，结合所给材料可知，写作要用一般现在时。写作时应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系密，符合逻辑关系。【点评】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语和句子会给文章增色，如 often，usually等频度副词的使用，使逻辑更加清晰。运用的恰到好处，也使表达更加精彩。7．【答案】Dear Sir,I am writing to recommend Tom for this year's Bravest Student Award.Tom is a hard-working student. He does well in all his lessons.Tom has many hobbies. He likes playingsports very much and basketball is his favorite. He is going to join the schoolbasketball team next term. He loves animals, so he keeps a rabbit as a pet andtakes good care of it at home.Tom is so helpful that he often helps his classmates with their lessons.He is also a kind and polite boy. He always gives his seat to the old people onthe bus.I think Tom has all the qualities to get the award.YoursDavid【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇表格作文，根据表格内容可知主要从学习，爱好，能力，品德四个方面介绍Tom的情况。由于所给内容非常常详细，所以我们要用正确的语言表述,用合适的连词把文章接起来就可以了。因为介绍人物，所以主要用一般现在时态。【点评】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯,表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。复合句的运用为文章增色,如 Tom is so helpful that he often helps his classmates with the lessons；He loves animals, so he keeps a rabbit as a pet and takes good care of it at home.8．【答案】Why Should We Protect WildAnimals My favourite animal is the panda. They arewhite and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feedon bamboo. They are very cute and lovely. But their situation is becoming verydifficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and babypandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are gettingsmaller. To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should create abetter life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so thatpandas can have enough food to eat. It is a good idea to raise money for them.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇议论文写作题，题目为Why Should We Protect Wild Animals 通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称单复数口吻来叙述。文章先介绍自己最喜欢的频危动物，然后介绍濒危的原因，最后谈谈自己的感受给出一些保护濒危动物的建议。【点评】在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：My favourite animal is；like climbing trees and walking；feed on；very cute and lovely；in danger；the bamboo forests are getting smaller； To protect animals；is to protect ourselves；create a better life for；set up nature parks；so that；raise money for them等等，且使用了连接词and，but，so that等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀作文。9．【答案】Myhome town-NanningMy home town-Nanning is bigger/larger thanany other city in Guangxi. It's in the south of Guangxi and it is the capitalcity of Guangxi. Now it has a population of about 7.4 million. It's famous asthe Green City. It is never very cold in winter and it isn't the hottest placein our country in summer. The people in Nanning are very friendly. So I love myhome town-Nanning a lot.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文写作题，以"居住环境"为话题 。通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称单数形式的口吻来叙述。文章可以先介绍自己的家乡在哪里，人口有多少，以及天气情况。然后介绍自己家乡有什么特色，最后谈谈自己的感受。【点评】在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如： My home town is bigger/larger than any other…in…；the capital city of；has a population of about…；It's famous as； never very cold in winter；isn't the hottest place；in summer；are very friendly； I love… a lot等等，且使用了连接词and, so等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀作文。10．【答案】 Mount Huang is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. Every year, a large number of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It's not far from here. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful. It's really a nice place to visit.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文作文。全文要用一般现在时进行书写，写作中应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语如 a large number of ，和时间状语从句While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique语法规则正确，表达流畅。1 / 1浙江省外研版初中英语八年级上册期末复习（题型专练）：书面表达一、书面表达1．（2019八上·新泰月考）很多家长为了让孩子赢在起跑线上，经常给他们报名参加各种课后补习班。假如某英文杂志社正在就是否应该让孩子参加课后补习班这样的话题征稿，请你根据提示写一篇短文，阐述一下你的观点，并向该报社投稿。提示：1）你是否同意；2）解释原因；3）你的观点。要求：1）词数：80—100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2）包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3）文中不要出现真实校名和人名。In some families,competition starts very young and continues until the kids get older.【答案】 In some families, competition starts veryyoung and continues until the kids get older. Parents send their children toall kinds of after-school classes. They think it's good for their children.They really want them to be successful.I don't agree with that. In my opinion,students should have free time to do whatever they want. Although it's normalto want successful children, it's even more important to have happy children.Parents are always comparing us with other children. It's crazy. I don't thinkit's fair. Why don't they let kids be kids Parents shouldn't push us so hard.Too much pressure is not good for our development. We should have time to relaxand think for ourselves.Weare sometimes busier on weekends than weekdays. I hope parents can cut out afew of our activities.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，按照要求就是否应该让孩子参加课后补习班这样的话题写征稿，写作中要包含：你是否同意；解释原因；你的观点。根据材料内容可知本文是一般现在时，人称是第一人称单数，写作时注意包含上述提示要点，并保持行文连贯，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。【点评】这篇短文按照材料所给的提示，针对主题进行了陈述，表达了自己的观点，内容全面，准确使用了一些固定搭配和连词，使文章连贯、通顺。如：这些send their children to all kinds of after-school classes，it's good for， want them to be successful，don't agree with， In my opinion，do whatever they want， Although it's normal to want successful children，comparing us with other children，Why don't they let，push us so hard，cut out，都是可圈可点之处，表达准确，使文章增色不少。2．假如你是琳达，你的好朋友文琪给你写了一封信，告诉你她在英语学习中遇到了两个困难：1）在英语课上不明白老师讲什么;2）害怕犯错误，不敢与同学们用英语交流。请针对上述问题用英语给她写一封70词左右的回信，提出你的建议。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearWen Qi,I'mhappy to hear from you.Ihope you will do better in English.Yours,Linda【答案】Dear Wen Qi,I'mhappy to hear from you. I know you have two problems about English learning. Ihave some advice for you. Listening to English songs is a good way. You canalso watch English news on TV or read some English newspapers. Don't be shy orafraid of making mistakes when you speak English. You should often talk withyour classmates in English. I hope my advice can help you improve your English.Ihope you will do better in English.Yours,Linda【知识点】应用文写作【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用作文，主要介绍文琪告诉自己在学习中遇到的困难及建议，时态是一般将来时和一般现在时，首先介绍自己了解了文琪的困难；然后介绍自己的建议；最后总结，希望文琪在英语方面做得更好。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。【点评】写作时注意作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：listen to；make mistakes；be afraid of doing sth.；talk with‘help sb. do sth.；do better in等。动名词做主语、祈使句和宾语从句的运用为文章增色不少，如：Listening to English songs is a good way. Don't be shy or afraid of making mistakes when you speak English.I hope my advice can help you improve your English.I hope you will do better in English.等。连词or，when的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。3．话题：本模块以“老舍茶馆”为话题，主要介绍了老舍的话剧《茶馆》及老舍的生平和创作。介绍人物是书面表达的话题之一。老舍是中国著名的作家。请根据下表提示写一篇短文，介绍一下他的情况。真名 舒庆春1899 出生于北京1913 在北京师范学校学习1924 去伦敦；教汉语1931 结婚，有四个孩子1957 创作《茶馆》1966 去世评价 被称为“人民艺术家”；是二十世纪最伟大的中国作家之一。【答案】 Lao She is a famous Chinese writer and his real name is Shu Qingchun. He was born in 1899 in Beijing. He studied in a teacher's school in Beijing in 1913. In 1924 he went to London and taught Chinese there. He got married in 1931 and had four children. He wrote Teahouse in 1957. He passed away in 1966. He was named "the People's Artist" and he's one of the greatest Chinese writers of the twentieth century.【知识点】材料作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国著名的作家——老舍，时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。首先介绍老舍的出生及籍贯；然后介绍老舍1913年在北京师范学校学习、1924年去伦敦教汉语、1931年结婚、1957年创作《茶馆》、1966年去世，时态是一般过去时；最后总结及评价老舍。为文章增色，注意运用好词好句，同时恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。【点评】写作时注意作文内容全面，涵盖提示信息。运用好词好句，如：be born；get married；pass away；be named；one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数等。被动语态和最高级的运用为文章增色不少，如：He was named "the People's Artist" and he's one of the greatest Chinese writers of the twentieth century. 等。连词and等运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。4．话题：本模块以“出行方式”为话题，主要介绍了一些外出的交通方式。假期就快到了, 同学们纷纷打算在假期出去旅游。就选择何种出行方式大家有不同的看法。请你根据表格中的提示，对此做简要介绍并表明你自己的观点。Wayof transportation Number ReasonPlane 10 Fast,excitingTrain 20 Safe,comfortableCoach 5 CheapYourchoice and reason ……要求：1）包含表格中所给信息，语句通顺、语法正确;2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。I did a survey about ways of transportationto choose during holidays among my classmates. Here are the results.【答案】 I did a survey about waysof transportation to choose during holidays among my classmates. Here are theresults.Most of the classmates in our class like totravel by train. They think it's the safest and most comfortable way. Ten ofthe students will choose to take a plane because they think it is fast andexciting. Only five of them will go by coach because it is cheap. My favouriteway of travelling is by train. I think it's safer and not expensive. Travellingby plane is fast but costs more money. Taking a coach is cheap but a littleslow.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】本文要求根据表格内容，介绍我班同学的出行方式。根据提示及要求，内容包括：10位同学喜欢乘飞机旅行，原因是乘飞机旅行快而且令人兴奋；20位同学喜欢乘火车旅行，原因是乘火车旅行安全而且舒服；5位同学喜欢乘公共汽车旅行，原因是乘公共汽车旅行快而且便宜；自己的旅行方式及原因。文体说明文；人称第一人称；时态一般现在时。适当运用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点评】这篇短文包含了题目所给的所有信息。连词and，but使用得当。还运用了原因状语从句及宾语从句。 Only five of them will go by coach because it is cheap. （原因状语从句） They think it's the safest and most comfortable way. （宾语从句）5．话题：本模块的话题是“安全和急救"。学习并懂得安全知识，在自己和别人遇到突发事故时会有很大的帮助。假定你是王伟，你的英国笔友戴维来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。●家庭安全：小心用火用电，外出时关好门窗；●游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖里游泳；●交通安全：过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。注意：1）词数80左右；2）请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。【答案】Dear David,Gladto receive your email. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow.Let me tell you something about them.Becareful with electricity when using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, forit may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure to close doors and windowsbefore leaving home. Besides, we mustn't swim alone, especially in deep riversor lakes. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyoneshould watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play onthe road.Ithink these rules are necessary as safety comes first.Havea good summer holiday!Yours,WangWei【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的提示要点给英国笔友戴维回一封电子邮件。写作中要包含所给的三个方面的内容，家庭安全，游泳安全和交通安全。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致的问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。【点评】这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将三个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。其中一些固定句式和短语，如be careful with; make sure; what's more; watch out等以及句型结构It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important.And our school warns us not to play on the road.等运用较为得体，表达较为准确，使文章更加流畅、自然。6．假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动，你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难，请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。要求：1）80一120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考要点：1）活动情况简介(时间、内容……)；2）遇到的困难(如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……)；3）请求帮助的事项。Dear Nick,How's everything going Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How's everything going Our school is holding an English readingfestival this June. I'm very interested in it. There are many" differentactivities in the festival, such as reading good English books, sharing goodstories and so on. It's a good chance for us to learn more about Westernculture. However, I have some problems. First, I don't bare enough books. For example,t want to get some books about Western history. Next, I'm not so good atEnglish. I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books withme and give me some advice on reading I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【知识点】应用文写作；提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求你给应该朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。本题给出了三方面内容要求：首先要写活动情况简介，其次写遭遇的困难，最后写请求帮助的事项。在写作时要注意时态，结合所给材料可知，写作要用一般现在时。写作时应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系密，符合逻辑关系。【点评】如果文章中使用了非常好的短语和句子会给文章增色，如 often，usually等频度副词的使用，使逻辑更加清晰。运用的恰到好处，也使表达更加精彩。7．紧张而充实的一学年又要结束了,东台市首届阳光少年的评选活动正如火如荼地进行。假如你是David，请根据下表所提示的内容，写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Tom（七年级四班）获取今年的最佳学生奖。学 习 努力学习，所有学科都学得很好。能 力 篮球打得好，他想下学期进入校篮球队。爱 好 喜爱动物，他在家养兔子当宠物并把它照顾得很好。品 德 1）乐于助人，经常帮助同学复习功课。 2）热心、有礼貌，在公共汽车上 ……要求： 1）条理清楚，语意连贯。2）紧扣主题，适当发挥。3）书写规范，标点正确。正文80字左右。信的开头称呼和结尾落款已经写好，不计入字数。Dear Sir,I am writing to recommend Tom for thisyear's Best Student Award.I think Tom has all the qualities to get the award.YoursDavid【答案】Dear Sir,I am writing to recommend Tom for this year's Bravest Student Award.Tom is a hard-working student. He does well in all his lessons.Tom has many hobbies. He likes playingsports very much and basketball is his favorite. He is going to join the schoolbasketball team next term. He loves animals, so he keeps a rabbit as a pet andtakes good care of it at home.Tom is so helpful that he often helps his classmates with their lessons.He is also a kind and polite boy. He always gives his seat to the old people onthe bus.I think Tom has all the qualities to get the award.YoursDavid【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇表格作文，根据表格内容可知主要从学习，爱好，能力，品德四个方面介绍Tom的情况。由于所给内容非常常详细，所以我们要用正确的语言表述,用合适的连词把文章接起来就可以了。因为介绍人物，所以主要用一般现在时态。【点评】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯,表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。复合句的运用为文章增色,如 Tom is so helpful that he often helps his classmates with the lessons；He loves animals, so he keeps a rabbit as a pet and takes good care of it at home.8．现如今有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如熊猫、虎和大象等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以"Why Should We Protect Wild Animals " 为题，根据以下提示信息，用英语写一篇短文。词数80左右。提示：1）介绍一下你最喜欢的濒危动物；2）濒危原因；3）保护它们的建议。Why Should We Protect WildAnimals 【答案】Why Should We Protect WildAnimals My favourite animal is the panda. They arewhite and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feedon bamboo. They are very cute and lovely. But their situation is becoming verydifficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and babypandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are gettingsmaller. To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should create abetter life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so thatpandas can have enough food to eat. It is a good idea to raise money for them.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇议论文写作题，题目为Why Should We Protect Wild Animals 通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称单复数口吻来叙述。文章先介绍自己最喜欢的频危动物，然后介绍濒危的原因，最后谈谈自己的感受给出一些保护濒危动物的建议。【点评】在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如：My favourite animal is；like climbing trees and walking；feed on；very cute and lovely；in danger；the bamboo forests are getting smaller； To protect animals；is to protect ourselves；create a better life for；set up nature parks；so that；raise money for them等等，且使用了连接词and，but，so that等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀作文。9．话题：本模块以"居住环境"为话题,围绕这一话题描写自己的家乡或所居住的城市。描述一个地方, 可以描述该地的位置、人口、天气、名胜古迹、特色及其发展变化等。根据以下提示信息, 以"My home town一Nanning"为题写一篇不少于80词的短文。可适当发挥。1）南宁市比广西的其他任何城市都大, 位于广西的南部;2）广西的首府, 现有约740万人口;3）作为"绿城"(the Green City)而出名;4）南宁冬天不冷, 夏天它也不是我国最热的地方;5）南宁的人民很友好。Myhome town-Nanning【答案】Myhome town-NanningMy home town-Nanning is bigger/larger thanany other city in Guangxi. It's in the south of Guangxi and it is the capitalcity of Guangxi. Now it has a population of about 7.4 million. It's famous asthe Green City. It is never very cold in winter and it isn't the hottest placein our country in summer. The people in Nanning are very friendly. So I love myhome town-Nanning a lot.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文写作题，以"居住环境"为话题 。通过分析可知时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称单数形式的口吻来叙述。文章可以先介绍自己的家乡在哪里，人口有多少，以及天气情况。然后介绍自己家乡有什么特色，最后谈谈自己的感受。【点评】在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，同时注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构。造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词，尽力使用自己熟悉单词句式，确保正确率。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语、较高级的语言，文章可以使用的短语如： My home town is bigger/larger than any other…in…；the capital city of；has a population of about…；It's famous as； never very cold in winter；isn't the hottest place；in summer；are very friendly； I love… a lot等等，且使用了连接词and, so等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚，内容饱满，表达流畅，是一篇优秀作文。10．请你根据以下提示，向外国友人简单介绍一下黄山(Mount Huang)。提示：1）位于安徽省南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去游览观光。2）乘公共汽车去大约要花3个小时；也可以乘火车去。3）登山可领略云海(the sea of clouds)、奇松(wondrous pines)、怪石(unique rocks)等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。注意：1）词数：80词左右。2） 不要逐字翻译。【答案】 Mount Huang is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. Every year, a large number of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It's not far from here. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful. It's really a nice place to visit.【知识点】提纲作文【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文作文。全文要用一般现在时进行书写，写作中应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语如 a large number of ，和时间状语从句While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique语法规则正确，表达流畅。1 / 1

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