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书信写作1．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了减少舌尖上的浪费，你校英语俱乐部拟举办有关“爱惜食物，从我做起”的英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 食物浪费的现象及危害；2. 你爱惜食物的做法；3.你的倡议。注意：1.词数不少于80；2..开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning,everyone.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That's all. Thank you for listening.2．假定你是某一中学的学生李华。你在美国的交换生朋友Tom，刚刚转到一所新学校，由于Tom不擅长交流，没有新朋友，且感到孤独。现在Tom给你写信，向你求助，希望你在交朋友方面，给他提供一些建议。内容包括：1.表达你难过的心情；2.交朋友的建议（三点以上）。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，你的美国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他作为交换生要来中国学习，他将住在中国接待家庭，他询问住在中国家庭会是否会有文化差异。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 表示祝贺；2. 说明可能会遇到的文化差异；3. 提出建议。注意：1．词数不少于50；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，你的好友Chris在暑假期间痴迷于网络直播，经常花很多时间观看各种节目，请根据以下要点提示，给Chris 写一封信：（1）分析网络直播受欢迎的原因；（2）阐述过度观看的危害；（3）提出合理建议。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：网络直播webcast 直播间 live studio 过度观看excessive viewingDear ChrisI’m really worried about your present situation where___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你班交换生Jim计划在暑假期间学习汉语，向你咨询。请你给Jim写封邮件，内容包括：1. 很高兴他打算学习汉语；2. 提供学习建议（如参加课程、阅读书籍、与人交流等）；3. 表达愿望。Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，来信希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.中文难学的原因；2.你的建议及理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于50。2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Jim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li hua7．假定你是红星中学高一学生李华，当前新型冠状病毒（novel coronavirus)在许多国家蔓延，你很担心英国好友Jim的健康，请你给他发电子邮件，提出预防新型冠状病毒的建议，内容包括：1. 养成健康的生活习惯（外出戴口罩，勤洗手）2. 经常锻炼身体3. 保持积极乐观的态度注意：1.词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：卫生hygieneDear Jim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班拟开展“阳光心态，轻装前行”的活动，现面向全 班征集活动设计方案。请给你的英国朋友Jim写信，内容包括：1. 介绍你的方案；2. 征求他的建议。注意：1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 了解到中医在治 疗疾病方面起到积极作用，这引起了他的浓厚兴趣，想到中国来学中医。 他希望了解更多相关信息，并听听你的建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1.你对中医的认识；2.你的建议。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。提示词：中医 Traditional Chinese Medicine/TCMDear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据以下提示给他回信。1. take a Chinese course2. learn and sing Chinese songs...注意：1.词数不少于60。2.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,I' m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua参考答案1．Good morning, everyone.It’s my great honor to be here and give a speech on saving food.Speaking of food, there are two ugly truths. First, a huge amount of food is wasted every year. Millions of tons of cooked and served food ends up in trash cans. Second, primary and secondary school students are among the top three food wasters.At present, China is still heavily dependent on the import of certain grains, and wasting food will make our efforts to be self-sufficient in vain. Moreover, wasting food also means wasting resources like water, land and energy. Therefore, it will damage the environment in the long run.Realizing the severe consequences of wasting food, I’ve been doing my bit to save food. At the school cafeteria, I ask for half-size servings when I’m not hungry. When dining out in restaurants with family or friends, I propose ordering smaller portions and taking the leftovers home. At home, I check the fridge before making shopping plans to avoid buying more food than we actually need.Saving food benefits every one of us. Let’s clean our plates today so that we can have enough for tomorrow.That’s all. Thank you for listening.【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类写作，要求写一篇演讲稿。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了减少舌尖上的浪费，你校英语俱乐部拟举办有关“爱惜食物，从我做起”的英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 食物浪费的现象及危害；2. 你爱惜食物的做法；3.你的倡议。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：give a speech on (发表演讲)；speak of(谈到)；truth(真相)；a huge amount of(大量的)；end up (结束)；be heavily dependent on(严重依赖于)；self-sufficient(自给自足的)；in vain(徒劳地)；in the long run(长远)；severe consequence(严重后果)；do one’s bit(尽自己的一份力量)；propose (建议)； leftover(残羹剩菜)；avoid doing sth.(避免做某事)；benefit(有助于)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Moreover, wasting food also means wasting resources like water, land and energy.是用来动名词作主语；At the school cafeteria, I ask for half-size servings when I’m not hungry.运用了时间状语从句；Let’s clean our plates today so that we can have enough for tomorrow.运用了目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Tom，I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school．But you needn't worry，for it is quite normal to have such a feeling in completely new surroundings．I have some suggestions for you on how to make new friends．Firstly, you should be kind and friendly. Then, no matter where you are , you must care others more ，which is also very important. What’s more, you should avoid conflicting with friends although there is some disagreement. Be patient and try to discuss with them.I believe you will soon become adapted to everything in the new school and become happy again!Yours，LiHua【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。【详解】假定你是某一中学的学生李华。你在美国的交换生朋友Tom，刚刚转到一所新学校，由于Tom不擅长交流，没有新朋友，且感到孤独。现在Tom给你写信，向你求助，希望你在交朋友方面，给他提供一些建议。内容包括：1.表达你难过的心情；2.交朋友的建议（三点以上）。通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school．宾语从句的运用；Then, no matter where you are , you must care others more ，which is also very important.定语从句的运用。3．Dear Jim,I’m happy to know that you will come to China to study and stay with a host family. Congratulations! It will be a great chance to learn Chinese culture.However. I would like to remind you that some cultural shocks do exist. Take greeting people for example, when you first meet someone in your country, you might hug and kiss him or her. But in China it is not a common practice. I think the best way of greeting is to shake hands. Shaking hands is a friendly greeting in Chinese situation.If you are unsure what to do, it is wise to remember the saying “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” and you’ll be quite well accepted by Chinese.Hope you have a pleasant stay in China.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。【详解】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，你的美国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他作为交换生要来中国学习，他将住在中国接待家庭，他询问住在中国家庭会是否会有文化差异。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 表示祝贺；2. 说明可能会遇到的文化差异；3. 提出建议。通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I’m happy to know that you will come to China to study and stay with a host family.宾语从句的运用；If you are unsure what to do, it is wise to remember the saying “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” and you’ll be quite well accepted by Chinese.条件状语从句的运用。4．Dear Chris,I’m really worried about your present situation where you’ve been addicted to webcast in summer holidays and always spend a lot of time watching programs in various kinds of live studios. My opinions are as follows.Undeniably, webcast is quite popular among young people, for it makes online shopping more convenient and leisure time colorful. However, there exist some potential risks if we have excessive viewing of it. Initially, it will do harm to our health, which may cause short-sightedness. Besides, excessive viewing takes up too much time and energy which should be put into study.Thus, never should we be an addict to webcast, wasting too much precious time on it. It’s wiser to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful.Best wishes!Yours truly,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华，你的好友Chris在暑假期间痴迷于网络直播，经常花很多时间观看各种节目，请根据要点提示，给Chris 写一封信。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.分析网络直播受欢迎的原因；2.阐述过度观看的危害；3.提出合理建议。写作时要准确运用时态，本文主要应该使用一般现在时。要注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：I’m really worried about your present situation. You’ve been addicted to webcast in summer holidays. You always spend a lot of time watching programs in various kinds of live studios. My opinions are as follows. Webcast is quite popular among young people. Webcast makes online shopping more convenient and leisure time colorful. There exist some potential risks if we have excessive viewing of it. do harm to our health，cause short-sightedness，take up too much time and energy which should be put into study. Never should we be an addict to webcast. waste too much precious time on webcast，It’s wiser to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful.可以使用的衔接词：1.表示选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor，or，as well as…，both…and…。2.表示因果关系的连接词：therefore，so，as a result，as a result of …，because of，due to，owing to，thanks to等。3.表示时间顺序的连接词：then，later，meanwhile，in the beginning，in the end，before long，as soon as，at first，for the first(second…)time，the minute，the moment等。4.表示转折对比关系的连接词：yet，but，while，on the contrary，on the other hand，however等。5.表示解释说明的连接词：that is，that is to say，in other words，such as，for instance，and so on等。6.表示递进关系的连接词：not only…but (also)，what’s more，what’s worse，besides，in addition，worse still，moreover等。7.表示总结的连接词：in a word，on the whole，in short，briefly，in brief，to sum up，in all等。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I’m really worried about your present situation where you’ve been addicted to webcast in summer holidays and always spend a lot of time watching programs in various kinds of live studios. 这句话运用了where引导的定语从句；However, there exist some potential risks if we have excessive viewing of it. 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句；Initially, it will do harm to our health, which may cause short-sightedness. Besides, excessive viewing takes up too much time and energy which should be put into study. 这两句话运用了which引导的定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：be worried about，be addicted to，as follows，do harm to，take up，set aside。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5．Dear Jim,I'm more than glad to know that you plan to learn Chinese during this summer vacation. Here I would like to offer some advice on learning Chinese.First, you should listen carefully to your teacher in class and practice as often as possible after class because mastering a language requires a lot of practice. Second, I’d like to recommend you to read some Chinese story books, which helps you enlarge your vocabulary and understand the different meanings of the words. Third, I think it is a good idea to communicate with Chinese native speakers. Last but not least, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs are good ways to learn idiomatic Chinese.I hope my advice will be helpful. Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你班交换生Jim计划在暑假期间学习汉语，向你咨询。请你给Jim写封邮件，内容包括：1. 很高兴他打算学习汉语；2. 提供学习建议（如参加课程、阅读书籍、与人交流等）；3. 表达愿望。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； summer vacation（暑假），advice（建议），practice（练习），master（掌握）， require（需要），idiomatic （符合语言习惯的），helpful（有帮助的），recommend （推荐），vocabulary（词汇量）及enlarge（扩大）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有plan to do（计划做某事），be glad to do（很高兴做某事），more than+adj (非常……)，communicate with（与……交流）以及listen to（听），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Second, I’d like to recommend you to read some Chinese story books, which helps you enlarge your vocabulary and understand the different meanings of the words.”，宾语从句“I'm more than glad to know that you plan to learn Chinese during this summer vacation.”及“I hope my advice will be helpful.”，形式主语“Third, I think it is a good idea to communicate with Chinese native speakers.”，非谓语动词“Last but not least, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs are good ways to learn idiomatic Chinese.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。6．Dear Jim,It’s great to know that you have begun to learn Chinese! You say you find Chinese difficult to learn. I quite understand your problem.Different from your language, most Chinese characters are from images. For English, most of time, you’ll know how to pronounce a word when you see it. But it is impossible in Chinese. In addition, Chinese grammar is totally different from English grammar. That definitely brings you more trouble.However, learning Chinese takes time. Don’t worry. I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help you know how to read Chinese characters. Besides, listening to Chinese songs or watching Chinese movies will also help. The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you will get with it.I wish you every success in learning the language! If you have any further questions, feel free to ask. Good luck!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些难，来信希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.中文难学的原因；2.你的建议及理由；3.你的祝愿。人称使用第二、三人称。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：begin to learn Chinese (开始学习中文)，different from (不同于)，most of time (大部分时间)，in addition (此外)，be exposed to (暴露于)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句You say you find Chinese difficult to learn.定语从句I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help you know how to read Chinese characters.比较级句型The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you will get with it.条件状语从句及祈使句If you have any further questions, feel free to ask.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，过渡词及短语的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。7．Dear Jim,How are you Over the past months, the novel coronavirus has made its way around many countries. The epidemic has a strong impact on our life and study. I really worry about you and I’m writing to share my suggestions with you in current situation.First, pay attention to personal hygiene. If you go out, wear a mask, which is both beneficial to yourself and others. And don’t forget to wash your hands often. Second, while you are at home, take some exercise to strengthen your immune system so that you will stay strong and healthy. Third, try to keep a positive attitude toward the virus and believe we will finally win the battle against the disease. Cheer up!Hope our life will soon return to normal and we will meet again. Send my best regards to your family.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是红星中学高一学生李华，当前新型冠状病毒（novel coronavirus)在许多国家蔓延，你很担心英国好友Jim的健康，请你给他发电子邮件，提出预防新型冠状病毒的建议，内容包括：1. 养成健康的生活习惯（外出戴口罩，勤洗手）；2. 经常锻炼身体；3. 保持积极乐观的态度。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：make one’s way；have a impact on；share…with…；in current situation；pay attention to；be beneficial to；take some exercise；cheer up；return to normal等等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如If you go out, wear a mask, which is both beneficial to yourself and others.使用了if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句；Second, while you are at home, take some exercise to strengthen your immune system so that you will stay strong and healthy.使用了while引导的时间状语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。8．Dear Jim,As the College Entrance Exam is nearing, our class is collecting ideas for an activity aimed to help us stay positive and manage stress. I would like to share mine with you.The first part of my plan is a lecture on stress management. An expert will be invited to offer us practical tips on that topic. Following the lecture, in a peer sharing session, we can share how we feel with each other. My plan also involves an afternoon of fun sports for everyone. Games like kite flying and fun relay races will be organized to give all students some precious quality time together. The whole class can not only take a break from the tight schedule, but also enjoy moments of accomplishment during the process.What do you think of my plan Since you are experienced in organizing extracurricular activities, can you give me some suggestions Thanks a lot! Yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封信：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班拟开展“阳光心态，轻装前行”的活动，现面向全 班征集活动设计方案。请给你的英国朋友Jim写信，内容包括：1. 介绍你的方案；2. 征求他的建议。时态应为一般将来时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； collect（征集），positive（积极的），manage（管理），practical（实用的）， involve（包含），tight（紧的），organize（组织），experienced （经验丰富的），accomplishment（成就）及extracurricular（课外的、业余的）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be aimed to do（旨在），share sth with sb（与某人分享某物），take a break from (从……中休息)，be invited to do（应邀做某事）以及be experienced in（在……方面有经验），而且还使用了状语从句“As the College Entrance Exam is nearing, our class is collecting ideas for an activity aimed to help us stay positive and manage stress.”，“Since you are experienced in organizing extracurricular activities, can you give me some suggestions ”，宾语从句“Following the lecture, in a peer sharing session, we can share how we feel with each other.”，非谓语动词“Games like kite flying and fun relay races will be organized to give all students some precious quality time together.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。9．Dear Jim,I'm delighted to learn that you are interested in TCM, and want to study it in China. I'd like to tell you something about it.TCM plays an important role in curing disease, which has a long history in China. It's very popular worldwide now, because it has less side effect and more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford. I think TCM has a bright future, and Beijing University of Chinese Medicine is a good choice to study TCM. You can also search for more detailed information about it on the Internet.Hope this is useful for you and look forward to your studying in Beijing.Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求李华给Jim回信，谈谈他对中医的认识以及他对Jim学习中医的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.你对中医的认识；2.你的建议。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）I'm delighted to learn；plays an important role；side effect and more reasonable price；more detailed information。第三步：连词成句1.I'm delighted to learn that you are interested in TCM,2.TCM plays an important role in curing disease, which has a long history in China.3. because it has less side effect and more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.4. You can also search for more detailed information about it on the Internet.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇表示文章结构顺序：提出看法；罗列建议；最后总结。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高级句式，如which引导的非限制性定语从句：TCM plays an important role in curing disease, which has a long history in China；because引导的原因状语从句：It's very popular worldwide now, because it has less side effect and more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford. 等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。10．Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions:First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll 1earn and remember Chinese words more easily. Besides, it helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.I hope you’ll find my suggestions helpful. Try to write me in Chinese next time. Looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，回复英国朋友Peter关于如何才能学好中文的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文；人称：第一、三人称为主；时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；结构：总-分-总法；要点：1. take a Chinese course2. learn and sing Chinese songs等第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）ask for；learn well；take a Chinese course；a few；be able to；learn from；fellow students；Chinese songs；watch TV；read books；make friends；a lot；next time；look forward to等第三步：连词成句1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.2. It is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.3. It should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll 1earn and remember Chinese words more easily.4. It helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.5. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.6. I hope you’ll find my suggestions helpful.7. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.等根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First；Then；2.表并列补充关系：Besides；and；also；3.表因果关系：as等连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. 使用了现在分词作状语；it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.使用了it作形式主语和as引导状语从句；it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll 1earn and remember Chinese words more easily.使用了it作形式主语和because引导状语从句；it helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.使用了it作形式主语和whatever引导的状语从句；They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.使用了and连接的并列句；I hope you’ll find my suggestions helpful.使用了find+宾语+宾语结构等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：ask for；learn well；a few；be able to；learn from；make friends；a lot；look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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