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传统论文思维

概述：先定义， 再原因，正反观点，举例子，措施。需要积累大量句子，词块，以及依托美文句子词块表达的逻辑思维。

一、定义（What is a big push）

A big push can be a bonus materially and mentally or a warning of potential trouble one presents to himself to overcome his laziness or lack of ambition.

二、原因+结果(cause and effect)

TS: necessary

原因：

It is not easy for people to step out of comfort zone.—》used to inertia（惰性） （文章中所有生词都在我的CCtalk公益美文课里有）

结果：

1. A big push can awaken us to the reality(物质层次)—》take specific measures to respond to different situations

2. goal: A big push inspires one’s enthusiasm and confidence(心理层次+正能量) --》build up one’s determination and perseverance

3. responsibility: A big push can force to take up due social responsibility and familial responsibility. (社会层次)

三、方法（How）

A big push takes effort and time definitely, but the following strategies can help you translate your push into action.

Set up small and achievable goals --》start with concrete objectives. Don’t bite off too much

Take pride in your achievements, as they are stepping stones to your goals.

Make a commitment publicly --》there is sufficient pressure to overcome laziness

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下水文章

A big push can be a bonus materially and mentally or a warning of potential trouble one presents to himself to overcome his laziness or lack of ambition.

A big push is undoubtedly necessary just because it is human’s nature to stick to one's comfort zone. Inertia can deprive our enthusiasm and our best intentions come to nothing eventually. (反向论证）However, once inertia is overcome, we will reap great rewards. （举例论证）For example, we may wake up to the reality and respond to it. Besides, if a big push is our goal, it not only arouses our lost enthusiasm, like the slumbering volcano, but also builds our determination and perseverance. Some young often are reluctant to write because they find it hard to seek inspiration. Actually, inspiration comes from purposeful daily practice, which in turn strengthens one’s perseverance and determination. Last, our sense of social responsibility serves as a big push. Often, when laziness sets in, think of the consequence others will suffer because no one is a lonely island nowadays especially in the team work.

Exactly, a big push takes effort and time, but the following strategies can help you translate your push into action.

First, set small and achievable goals with concrete objectives. Don’t bite off too much. An impractical goal might well leave one at a loss where to start. Then follows laziness accompanied by various excuses. Second, take pride in our achievements, as they are stepping stones to our goals. Our lack of confidence mostly results from that of the sense of achievement. So see every bit of achievement as a bonus and keep going for a bigger vision of future. Third, make a commitment publicly. Honestly, a big push alone can guarantee success. Proper supervision can put sufficient pressure on one to overcome laziness.

In conclusion, a big push is just the catalyst kindling our inner fire to pursue our goals. It can only serve its purpose with due supervision and unceasing effort.

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创新模式

概括：

方法二：演讲文体。大量排比的疑问句，通过揭露问题，引出话题，吸引读者，呼吁推进。具体， 先排比疑问句，再整齐划一呼吁祈使句，形式上统一的topic sentence. 内容是推进的，可以适行动的原因、行动的正反说理、行动的措施等。这样的处理，形式上做到衔接和连贯，内容上做到了递进。段内通过，first，besides， lately，等衔接词，完成了段内的闭合性。

方法三：小故事情景导入，加入自己的判断和感情，形成观点，推出文章。 记叙文的写法。情节上的继续，描写句子可以短一些。情感的变化，推动了情节的发展。设计母亲的角色，因为更适合情节和人物个性。一定要注意，心理情节的变化。长短句结合。

方法四：书信体。概括问题---解决问题--注意写作语气用词的，口语化，亲切感

一、创新范文——演讲文体

How many times have we told ourselves not to procrastinate with absolute determination?How many times have we hate being so lazy as to get nowhere?What we need is give ourselves a big push!

Push ourselves now!A big push can be a bonus materially and mentally, or a warning of potential trouble. We should use it to overcome laziness or lack of ambition. It is human’s nature to stick to the comfort zone. Inertia can deprive our enthusiasm! We cannot afford the price!

Push ourselves now!The bright future is in sight. Once inertia is overcome, we will reap great rewards. We may wake up to the reality and respond to it. Besides, if a big push is our goal, it not only arouses our lost enthusiasm, the slumbering volcano, but also builds our determination and perseverance. Last, a big push is our sense of social responsibility. Often, when laziness grows in our heart, think of the consequence others will suffer because no one is a lonely island nowadays especially in the team work.

Push ourselves now!Exactly, a big push takes effort and time, but the following strategies can help translate our push into action. First, set small and achievable goals with concrete objectives. Don’t bite off too much. An impractical goal might well leave one at a loss where to start. Then follows laziness accompanied by various excuses. Second, take pride in our achievements, as they are stepping stones to our goals. Our lack of confidence mostly results from that of the sense of achievement. So see every bit of achievement as a bonus and keep going for bigger vision of future. Third, make a commitment publicly. Proper supervision can put sufficient pressure on one to overcome laziness.

Push ourselves now! A big push is just the catalyst kindling our inner fire to pursue the goal.

想法来源：（尤利西斯）

Push off, and sitting well in order smite

The sounding furrows; for my purpose holds

To sail beyond the sunset, and the baths

Of all the western stars, until I die.

It may be that the gulfs will wash us down:

It may be we shall touch the Happy Isles,

我要乘坐大帆船，天涯海角走一遭，

看看月亮的安乐窝，晚霞升起的地方，

也许会死在风暴里，也许来到神秘岛，

二、创新范文——故事导入意识流形式

My friend Jack called me up and told that he would pay the price for his procrastination. But he didn’t really want to get started.

My only response was that it was a big push that he needed. It can be a bonus materially and mentally, or a warning of potential trouble. I wished him to know that that it was human’s nature to stick to the comfort zone. Inertia can deprive our enthusiasm! We should use it to overcome laziness or lack of ambition.

Putting down the phone, I was reminded of last year when I was annoyed by my inertia too. I was reluctant to carry out any plan. My world was like a slumbering volcano. Until one day, I woke up to the reality. I have to respond to my inertia, which otherwise would have got me nowhere.

It must have been a tough road paved with thorns. I couldn’t help smiling bitterly.Exactly, a big push takes effort and time, but the following strategies did help me translate my push into action. First, I tried to set small and achievable goals with concrete objectives. My mother often told me not to bite off too much. She warned me that an impractical goal might well leave me at a loss.Then followed laziness accompanied by various excuses. Then, I take pride in my achievements, as they are stepping stones to my goals. My lack of confidence mostly results from that of the sense of achievement. It is quite wise to see every bit of achievement as a bonus and keep going for a bigger vision of future.It may seem foolish if you know I made a commitment publicly. Only I know that proper supervision can put sufficient pressure on me to overcome laziness.

Could I tell Jack about it?

I should promise him that the bright future is in sight once inertia is overcome. It not only arouses his lost enthusiasm, but also builds his determination and perseverance.

I then dialed his number. I cannot wait to tell him that a big push is just the catalyst kindling his inner fire to pursue the goal.

想法来源：（达洛维夫人）

Mrs. Dalloway said she would buy the flowers herself.

For Lucy had her work cut out for her. The doors would be taken off their hinges; umpelmayer's men were coming. And then, thought Clarissa Dalloway, what a morning—fresh as if issued to children on a beach.

达洛维夫人说她要亲自去买些花。

因为露西已有一份合适的工作要做。要把门从铰链上卸下来；昂伯尔梅尔公司的人就要到了。然后，克拉丽莎·达洛维思忖，多惬意的早晨啊——空气清新得仿佛是特意送给海滩上的孩子们似的。

三、创新范文——书信

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