I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around, which I felt deep in my heart.

我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪不自禁地流。在我心里深深感受到正是爱让这世界转动。

（点评：本句使用了独立主格结构还有一个强调句型，另外运用了非限制性定语从句，这些传神地升华了主题。）

【举一反三，灵活使用】

From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go fast, but a group of persons can travel farther.

从这个项目中，我们也了解到了同伴的重要性。正如俗话说，一个人可以走得快，但一群人可以走得更远。

From the experience, I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.

从这次经历中，我充分意识到作为一名医生的责任和巨大的价值，因此，这激励了我继续追求梦想。

02

主旨升华——成长型

“在改变中成长”是读后续写的一个重要主题。而对于这类主题的升华，可以使用如下技巧。

升华技巧一：学习知识促成长

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

It’s never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.

学习永远为时不晚。每个人都有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。

（点评：本句用了单词individual“个人，个体”；以及短语make more attempts“做更多尝试”。）

升华技巧二：发挥天赋促成长

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.

事实上，每个人都有天赋。当你发现它的时候，你要勇敢，也要努力。你最终能创造奇迹。

（点评：本句用了单词possess“拥有”；以及短语create miracles“创造奇迹”。）

升华技巧三：追逐梦想促成长

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

As long as we dare to dream and don’t let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.

只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。

（点评：本句用到了短语：as long as“只要”；take full advantage of“充分利用”；realize your dreams表示“实现梦想”。）

【举一反三，灵活使用】

That day, David got a special award for his courage. He was shining on the winner’s podium. David, with so many birth problems, was a hero to all of us and most importantly, to himself!

那天，大卫因为他的勇气而获得了一个特殊的奖。他在获胜者的领奖台上闪耀着光芒。患有先天性疾病的大卫是我们所有人的英雄，最重要的是，是他自己的英雄！

It’s never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.

追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。

升华技巧四：战胜恐惧促成长

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.

战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。

（点评：本句用到了what引导的表语从句。）

升华技巧五：战胜自卑促成长

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.

我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且我变得更快乐，因为我已经意识到，你的个性决定你真正是谁。

（点评：本句用到了单词eventually“最后，终于”，和personality“个性”以及强调句）

【举一反三，灵活使用】

In class, I tried my best to seize every opportunity to improve myself. Gradually, I began to have normal conversations with my classmates and got along well with them. Everything in life was becoming more and more beautiful.

在课堂上，我尽力抓住一切机会来提高自己。渐渐地，我开始和我的同学们正常地交谈，并和他们相处得很好。生活中的一切都在变得越来越美好了。

升华技巧六：克服困难促成长

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goals finally.

通往成功的路不会平坦，它会充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要怀有希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现目标。

（点评：本句用到了单词smooth“平坦的”；以及高级短语overcome all the difficulties；make every effort; as long as。）

升华技巧七：战胜消极促成长

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.

态度对我们来说比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去；我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。

（点评：本句使用了比较级；以及短语positive attitude“积极的态度”。）

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主旨升华——脱困型

读后续写常涉及到某些危险的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型，如：火灾、森林遇到猛兽等。此类主题可以采取下列升华技巧。

升华技巧一：经历+感悟

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.

那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆中。

（点评：本句用了so ... that ...“如此……以至于……”）

【举一反三，灵活使用】

Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.

最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法脱离险境。

升华技巧二：名言/句型+感悟

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

Only then did I realize that it was bravery that helps us conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.

直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢帮助我们克服路途中的一切困难。

（点评：本句运用倒装句和强调句强化“勇敢”，属于点睛之笔。）

【举一反三，灵活使用】

Life will hit us unexpectedly, but there is always someone to help us out and there is always hope waiting for us.

生活总会出乎意料地打击我们，但总有人帮助我们，总有希望在等着我们。

We will meet various challenges in life, but we should never give up easily. Just as the famous saying goes, sunshine always comes after the rain.

人生中我们会碰到各种挑战，但是不要轻易放弃。正如名言所说，风雨后总能见阳光。

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主旨升华——人与社会型

读后续写常涉及到主人公在生活中所发生的一些事。此类主题可以采取下列升华技巧。

升华技巧一：感悟

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me, there is none other than my mom Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can do something. When I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.

每个人都有一个他们崇拜的榜样。对我来说不是别人，正是我妈妈。如果我的生活中没有她，我将不知道我是否能做某事。当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望能成为像妈妈一样伟大的母亲。

（点评：本句用了短语none other than“正是”；as ... as“和……一样”，表达了主人公对他母亲的崇拜之情。）

升华技巧二：画面定格

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.

孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，一次又一次地吻着他们。

（点评：本句通过动词“said”、“hug”和“kiss”描写了一个感人的画面。）

【举一反三，灵活使用】

In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.

那天晚上，爸爸回来了。我骄傲地拿出了我自己的钱，递给了爸爸。

升华技巧三：修辞

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear.

我迅速拿出相机，拍下了这一罕见的场景——我们被一只北极熊抢劫了。

（点评：本句采用了拟人的修辞手法，生动地描写了当时的情形。）

【举一反三，灵活使用】

That affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming

那份亲情像一杯绿茶，沁人心脾，温暖人心。

升华技巧四：对话

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

Warmth ran through his body and tears welled up in his eyes, murmuring “She saw me barefoot and gave me shoes but how will I be able to pay her back?”

暖意涌入了他的身体，泪水从眼眶里涌出，我喃喃地说：“她看见我光着脚，给了我鞋子，但我怎么能回报她呢？”

（点评：本句用了单词“murmur”引出主人公内心所想。）

【举一反三，灵活使用】

Lucy’s mom sensed her daughter’s worry and gave her a reassuring pat on the back. “You’ll be great, dear. Just do your best. That’s all that matters.”

露西的妈妈感觉到了女儿的担忧，拍拍她的背，让她安心。“亲爱的，你会变得更好的。尽你最大的努力。这才是最重要的。”

升华技巧五：首尾呼应

【案例分析，掌握技巧】

开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.

一天，在Arthur上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。

结尾：What a funny day! Arthur couldn’t stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience.

多么有趣的一天啊！每当Arthur想起这次欢乐的经历时，他就笑个不停。

（点评：本句结尾运用了一个感叹句，巧妙地呼应了文章的开头。

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